The EWN Grand Prix Discussion Thread

[Super_Dave]

Just read the latest Grand Prix show.... Pretty intense stuff. Awesome job bud.

[magglis]

Just read the latest Grand Prix show.... Pretty intense stuff. Awesome job bud.
Thanks bro:)

40% of the show is ready and the show will be up Saturday for sure

[CricketTragic]

Kyojin: Oh you think just because you're telling me I'm going to win means I'll suddenly respect you? No chance. Don't think you have me fooled Israel. The real reason you're pulling for me is because you want to avenge the loss I caused you a few months ago, and where better to do it than the grand finals of the EWN Grand Prix? Well I'll stop you now. You're right when you say I will come out victorious, but you're wrong if you think it's a good thing for you. When the grand finals do come around, I'll lay you out just like I'm going to do to Smyth & Divine.

OOC: For sure man. Winning the first tournament will have helped that a lot.

Israel: Do you really need to pamper your ego that much to say that I am seeking your respect? Kyojin I ooze respect and while you are as always only partially right as I do wish to seek amends for one of my few losses which cost me The endurance title that you could not even hold, The reason why I said you would win is very simple, while Divine and Mr Smyth are worried about me and making fun at my expense ala writing cheques that they cannot cash you have been focused at the job at hand and I commend you for that though I would be totally suprised if you took the whole EWNGP2 out.

If you do though then the scenes set for me to defeat you and become the most single dominant champion in EWNGP and that my friend is not a joke.

[wrestlingfan66513]

Hawk:All I got from that last match is that both men were so bad we couldn't find a winner. Bu whether that happens again or not just know I will be waiting in the finals for the winner

[bearkg88]

Hawk:All I got from that last match is that both men were so bad we couldn't find a winner. Bu whether that happens again or not just know I will be waiting in the finals for the winner

Divine: hey bird boy, the only thing from last week was that divine and kyojin tore the house down. Dont get too ahead of yourself chumpette, you havent won your semi final match. Divine will be watching closely

[wrestlingfan66513]

Divine: hey bird boy, the only thing from last week was that divine and kyojin tore the house down. Dont get too ahead of yourself chumpette, you havent won your semi final match. Divine will be watching closely

Hawk: Glad your paying attention to the onlythreat here but you haven't won anything here yet.

[magglis]

80% of the show is ready, gonna do the rest tomorrow and show should be up tomorrow night

[BennyTheBall]

80% of the show is ready, gonna do the rest tomorrow and show should be up tomorrow night

Excellent, although I was hoping for a read tonight while I am trapped at work.

[bearkg88]

Excellent, although I was hoping for a read tonight while I am trapped at work.

Ditto. But tomorrow is cool. Boy is work going to suck tonight

[magglis]

Also after i post the show i will make a roster thread for Grand Prix #3

[S.E. Zero]

80% of the show is ready, gonna do the rest tomorrow and show should be up tomorrow night

Great news. Will be a great read.

[bearkg88]

Show today! Show today! Hooray hooray!

[TheJosephBanks]

Show today! Show today! Hooray hooray!

Show!
Show!
Show!
Show!

[magglis]

Show will be up in one hour.I'm just adding some commentary and editing the show.Anyone saving me from doing the fillers?

[magglis]

Also if you haven't filled the prediction contest do it NOW!!

[magglis]

Full show is up and feedback is always welcome and it helps me improve my work:)

Favorite Moment:
Best Match:
Best Promo:
Best line of commentary:
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved:
Did you find the results fair?:
Any Other Constructive Criticism:
Overall Show Grade:

[magglis]

Many thanks to Super-Dave for making the GP3 poster and i wasn't sure if the pic was viewable so i posted the attachment too

[TheJosephBanks]

Favorite Moment:

Kaige vs Hawk: Kaige hitting the powerbomb, then a buckle bomb, and then the Ballad of an Asshole; complete with Hawk kicking out. And Kaige showing his selling skills, staying down for 10+ seconds after some elbows and the Spinning DDT.

Mr. Smyth vs Kyojin vs Divine: Either the Tower of Doom, or the Rule/Yakuza Kick/Brainbuster Spot

Best Match: Smyth/Kyojin/Divine

Best Promo: Mr. Smyth. His character is just so hatable! I liked the parts about the tournament changing to cater to Kyojin/Divine and not hurting feelings.

Best line of commentary: Mason: He’s sassy tonight, isn’t he?

Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: Everything seemed fine; I saw that I missed a word.

Did you find the results fair?: Seem fair to me, I suppose.

Any Other Constructive Criticism: Just to put spaces between the '.' and the following words. Otherwise, everything is all good.

Overall Show Grade: B+


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Side note: Congratulations Hawk and Kyojin, the finals should be a must see. :D

[magglis]

Favorite Moment:

Kaige vs Hawk: Kaige hitting the powerbomb, then a buckle bomb, and then the Ballad of an Asshole; complete with Hawk kicking out. And Kaige showing his selling skills, staying down for 10+ seconds after some elbows and the Spinning DDT.

Mr. Smyth vs Kyojin vs Divine: Either the Tower of Doom, or the Rule/Yakuza Kick/Brainbuster Spot

Best Match: Smyth/Kyojin/Divine

Best Promo: Mr. Smyth. His character is just so hatable! I liked the parts about the tournament changing to cater to Kyojin/Divine and not hurting feelings.

Best line of commentary: Mason: He’s sassy tonight, isn’t he?

Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: Everything seemed fine; I saw that I missed a word.

Did you find the results fair?: Seem fair to me, I suppose.

Any Other Constructive Criticism: Just to put spaces between the '.' and the following words. Otherwise, everything is all good.

Overall Show Grade: B+


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Side note: Congratulations Hawk and Kyojin, the finals should be a must see. :D

That was Benny's line:D

[TheJosephBanks]

That was Benny's line:D

:P And it was still good! Commentary people always have the best lines

[No_1eddiefan]

Favorite Moment: Have a guess? ;) I'm really quite honored in all honesty. I thought Bear would have got the win.
Best Match: Kyo-Smyth-Divine
Best Promo: Don't normally do this but I'm gonna vote for myself, along with Benny & Bear, I felt we all put an incredible amount of effort into this. Hawk-Kaige's promo was brilliant too.
Best line of commentary: I gotta agree with Rilla/TJB, the sassy line was brilliant.
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: Again, I'm gonna agree with Rilla/TJB and say that the lack of spaces after full stops is a little annoying- but at the same time Mag, I know that you're writing in your second language and it takes time to pick up certain things- THBK used to always put 'too' when needing to put any variation of the word 'two' or 'to' but he worked it in and it's great to see.
Did you find the results fair?: I'm not gonna complain haha. Hawk-Kaige was as tight as Kyo-Smyth-Divine though so I commend you Mag for making a decision on both matches.
Any Other Constructive Criticism: Apart from the bit about full stops, nothing.
Overall Show Grade: A-. Brilliant show once again. This is really turning into a must-see event.

[No_1eddiefan]

Side note: Congratulations Hawk and Kyojin, the finals should be a must see. :D

Thanks man!

I'd just like to quickly take this moment and say to Benny & Bear that it was an honour working with the both of you guys and it really could have gone any way. Both Smyth & Divine will be World Champions one day- mark my words.

WF, I'm looking forward to the final and working with you man. It's no secret that Hawk is one of my favourite characters in JBW right now so I'm looking forward to this.

[TTC]

*Brock walks in to participate in the tournament once more. Sees that Shaz is competing. Walks back to his car while flicking everyone off.*

[BennyTheBall]

Favorite Moment: Working with Bear & Eddie. As soon as I saw that I would come up against at least one of them (let alone both!) I knew I wouldn't win this tournament but then I got to do a triple threat promo with Bear & Eddie. That there is why I efed - writing with guys who are awesome and who make it great fun. Fuck winning - that's the holy grail.
Best Match: Smyth/Divine/Kyo
Best Promo: Smyth/Divine/Kyo
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: Nope.
Did you find the results fair?: Yep.
Any Other Constructive Criticism: Spaces after full stops! Other than that, I really enjoyed the Kaige/Hawk promo. Hawk is just one of those guys who soars (pun intended) and TJB really stepped it up. Kaige will get a title soon, I'm sure of it.
Overall Show Grade: B+

[magglis]

Thanks for the feedback guys i want to say that you all did a good job and i had to take some difficult decisions.About the spaces i kinda prefer to write like that because it helps me write faster and if i have to edit that it would take me time to do it

[bearkg88]

So at work but did a quick read of the show. Here are my thoughts(ill provide proper feedback when i have time)

First off, congrats to wf/mike hawk. Hawk is becoming one of my favorite characters on ewn so glad to see him get some recognition.

I really enjoyed working with benny and eddie, as ive never really worked with either besides eddie with the punk/edge feud. So here comes my only criticism. I thought smyth beat us both. I mean, kyojin wins, alot, and while i feel like eddies promo was REALLY good, i liked bennys more. Maybe that is just me though. Im not knocking you though mags as i know it was a tough choice

[magglis]

So at work but did a quick read of the show. Here are my thoughts(ill provide proper feedback when i have time)

First off, congrats to wf/mike hawk. Hawk is becoming one of my favorite characters on ewn so glad to see him get some recognition.

I really enjoyed working with benny and eddie, as ive never really worked with either besides eddie with the punk/edge feud. So here comes my only criticism. I thought smyth beat us both. I mean, kyojin wins, alot, and while i feel like eddies promo was REALLY good, i liked bennys more. Maybe that is just me though. Im not knocking you though mags as i know it was a tough choice
Just to know guys in my eyes the better men won.

Two weeks ago some of you disagree with Benny getting the win but i found him better at that assignment:)

[NiallF96]

Diamond: This is where it will all begin, GP 3. The rise of The Prodigy. When I win this... THEN those idiots in IWA and JBW will sit up and take notice!

[magglis]

Grand Prix #3 Rage in the Cage roster:

Artemis Eclipse

Jman

Sagittarius Blue

Chris Divine

Chris Diamond

Avidico

Shaz

Brock Edwards


We finally have full roster.I want to welcome you all, some of you are here for the second time.You won't be disappointed i can assure you that.But this time i don't want o post card without listening from all of you about who you want to face first.S who do you want to face?

[TTC]

Diamond: This is where it will all begin, GP 3. The rise of The Prodigy. When I win this... THEN those idiots in IWA and JBW will sit up and take notice!
Brock: No you won't win. You are no Prodigy. No go play with some Leggos

Grand Prix #3 Rage in the Cage roster:

Artemis Eclipse

Jman

Sagittarius Blue

Chris Divine

Chris Diamond

Avidico

Shaz

Brock Edwards


We finally have full roster.I want to welcome you all, some of you are here for the second time.You won't be disappointed i can assure you that.But this time i don't want o post card without listening from all of you about who you want to face first.S who do you want to face?


Brock: Everyone fucker.

OOC: Either Blue or Diamond.

[magglis]

Brock: No you won't win. You are no Prodigy. No go play with some Leggos


Brock: Everyone fucker.

OOC: Either Blue or Diamond.
I hear you bro anyone else has a suggestion for a match?

[NiallF96]

Brock: No you won't win. You are no Prodigy. No go play with some Leggos


Brock: Everyone fucker.

OOC: Either Blue or Diamond.

Diamond: aw shut your mouth Brock, your face looks like a chewed up raspberry! You better hope you don't face me...

[bearkg88]

Jman! Jman! Jman! :) :)

[magglis]

Jman! Jman! Jman! :) :)


Diamond: aw shut your mouth Brock, your face looks like a chewed up raspberry! You better hope you don't face me...
Ok bear good, anyone else?

What about you Niall?

[NiallF96]

Ok bear good, anyone else?

What about you Niall?

I don't mind although a match vs Brock don't sound too bad :)

[TTC]

Diamond: aw shut your mouth Brock, your face looks like a chewed up raspberry! You better hope you don't face me...

Brock: I don't fear you.

[NiallF96]

Brock: I don't fear you.

Diamond: Well done. I don't fear you either buddy

[magglis]

I don't mind although a match vs Brock don't sound too bad :)

Ok that's cool

I'm gonna wait to see what the others have to say when they will be online and then i will post the card

[thejman93]

Jman: Arguably, the match that put "So Fine" on the map was a main event on HWA Anarchy against yours truly. Chris, my friend, I look forward to the rematch in this tournament. As for my first opponent, though, I want to settle a score with a certain Bostonian. Artemis, Team Fuck It aside, you're a piece of shit on the backside of this business.

[No_1eddiefan]

Kyojin: It's nice to see some talk about Grand Prix III, but everybody needs to remember that Grand Prix II isn't finished yet and live from Japan next week, I'll exposure the flaws of Mike 'Mayhem' Hawk.

[magglis]

Jman: Arguably, the match that put "So Fine" on the map was a main event on HWA Anarchy against yours truly. Chris, my friend, I look forward to the rematch in this tournament. As for my first opponent, though, I want to settle a score with a certain Bostonian. Artemis, Team Fuck It aside, you're a piece of shit on the backside of this business.
Alright Jman i hear you bro

[bearkg88]

Jman: Arguably, the match that put "So Fine" on the map was a main event on HWA Anarchy against yours truly. Chris, my friend, I look forward to the rematch in this tournament. As for my first opponent, though, I want to settle a score with a certain Bostonian. Artemis, Team Fuck It aside, you're a piece of shit on the backside of this business.

Oh oh! Nvm. I wanna see jman vs eclipse first.

*laughs devilishly*

Um...brock or diamond then :)

[magglis]

Myers: Sunday 27/1/2013 live from Saitama Super Arena in Saitama Japan.Mike Hawk will fight Kyojin to determine the next Grand Prix champion.Also on the show the IWA world Heavyweight champion will make a special appearance

[TTC]

Diamond: Well done. I don't fear you either buddy

Brock: That's what you are saying now, but you'll be shitting your pants ala Sid.

[TTC]

Oh oh! Nvm. I wanna see jman vs eclipse first.

*laughs devilishly*

Um...brock or diamond then :)

Brock: Bring it Divine bitch.

[thejman93]

Brock: That's what you are saying now, but you'll be shitting your pants ala Sid.

Jman: Figured you'd have followed the career of Psycho Sid, Brock. Takes a talentless hack to know one, I suppose.

[magglis]

Jman: Figured you'd have followed the career of Psycho Sid, Brock. Takes a talentless hack to know one, I suppose.
Myers: Hey at least he didn't break a leg so far

[thejman93]

Myers: Hey at least he didn't break a leg so far

That'll come. Especially if we meet in this thing.

[TTC]

Jman: Figured you'd have followed the career of Psycho Sid, Brock. Takes a talentless hack to know one, I suppose.
Brock: Yeah and you didn't. Cause you obviously know too much about him.

That'll come. Especially if we meet in this thing.

Brock: You are an idiot.

[thejman93]

Brock: Yeah and you didn't. Cause you obviously know too much about him.


Brock: You are an idiot.

Jman: I remember his feud with Shawn Michaels. In fact, I remember HBK beating him with a superkick. Just like I'll do to you.

[TTC]

Jman: I remember his feud with Shawn Michaels. In fact, I remember HBK beating him with a superkick. Just like I'll do to you.

Brock: We get it Jman, you're old and talk out of your ass a lot.

[Shaz11]

Grand Prix #3 Rage in the Cage roster:

Artemis Eclipse

Jman

Sagittarius Blue

Chris Divine

Chris Diamond

Avidico

Shaz

Brock Edwards


We finally have full roster.I want to welcome you all, some of you are here for the second time.You won't be disappointed i can assure you that.But this time i don't want o post card without listening from all of you about who you want to face first.S who do you want to face?


Hmmm. I'd say....Jman or Divine. :D

[scribbler_jones]

Grand Prix #3 Rage in the Cage roster:

Artemis Eclipse

Jman

Sagittarius Blue

Chris Divine

Chris Diamond

Avidico

Shaz

Brock Edwards


We finally have full roster.I want to welcome you all, some of you are here for the second time.You won't be disappointed i can assure you that.But this time i don't want o post card without listening from all of you about who you want to face first.S who do you want to face?


Honestly, makes no never mind to me! I'm enjoying seeing this all play out!

[magglis]

Hmmm. I'd say....Jman or Divine. :D


Honestly, makes no never mind to me! I'm enjoying seeing this all play out!
Ok boys good to know

If any of you haven't posted your bio do it now please

[bearkg88]

Ok boys good to know

If any of you haven't posted your bio do it now please

Do i need to repost mine ese?

[magglis]

Do i need to repost mine ese?

Yes bro if you can

[bearkg88]

Yes bro if you can

Im at work. Ill try once im done

[magglis]

Im at work. Ill try once im done
Ok bro cool

[BennyTheBall]

Look at that - they have to gimmick it up to match the intensity of EWNGP II. ;)

[TTC]

Look at that - they have to gimmick it up to match the intensity of EWNGP II. ;)

Brock: Ssssshhhhhh...... *Points to a nearby T.V. and it starts showing a video of Brock beating Smyth blind folded.* Don't talk if you can't back it up.

[BennyTheBall]

Brock: Ssssshhhhhh...... *Points to a nearby T.V. and it starts showing a video of Brock beating Smyth blind folded.* Don't talk if you can't back it up.

*Mr. Smyth looks at the TWE Iron Fist title draped over his shoulder. He then notices the lack of title belts on Brock.*

Mr. Smyth: Yeah, it's me that struggles to "back it up."

[TTC]

*Mr. Smyth looks at the TWE Iron Fist title draped over his shoulder. He then notices the lack of title belts on Brock.*

Mr. Smyth: Yeah, it's me that struggles to "back it up."

Brock: Funny. Now go get a REAL title.

[BennyTheBall]

Brock: Funny. Now go get a REAL title.

Mr. Smyth: This is a real title, but if you would like to prove me wrong, then by all means do. I would love for you to show me one of your 'real' titles. Past or present.

[TTC]

Mr. Smyth: This is a real title, but if you would like to prove me wrong, then by all means do. I would love for you to show me one of your 'real' titles. Past or present.

Brock: No that's a paper plate title. So, go get me a real championship which does not include the "fake" Endurance Title you, so proudly didn't win.

[BennyTheBall]

Brock: No that's a paper plate title. So, go get me a real championship which does not include the "fake" Endurance Title you, so proudly didn't win.

Mr. Smyth: Give it three weeks, and the Endurance title will be mine. As for my 'paper' title, well that's your opinion. I am still waiting for some evidence of your title wins though. I mean, if you're not currently holding a title - which is very easily believable - you could show me a photograph of you winning a championship title from the past.

Assuming, of course, that you are not a steroid pumped, useless, waste of time, big mouth, asinine dullard who spends a lot of time talking and very little time actually achieveing more than being able to wipe his own arse without poking his finger through the toilet roll.

[TTC]

Mr. Smyth: Give it three weeks, and the Endurance title will be mine. As for my 'paper' title, well that's your opinion. I am still waiting for some evidence of your title wins though. I mean, if you're not currently holding a title - which is very easily believable - you could show me a photograph of you winning a championship title from the past.

Assuming, of course, that you are not a steroid pumped, useless, waste of time, big mouth, asinine dullard who spends a lot of time talking and very little time actually achieveing more than being able to wipe his own arse without poking his finger through the toilet roll.

Brock: I still have my money on Kyo. And my opinion does matter more than anyone's else.

http://www.5thround.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/Brock-Lesnar-Black-BG.jpg

There's your proof.

OOC: I was actually in the shitter. LOL XD

[BennyTheBall]

Brock: I still have my money on Kyo. And my opinion does matter more than anyone's else.

http://www.5thround.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/Brock-Lesnar-Black-BG.jpg

There's your proof.

OOC: I was actually in the shitter. LOL XD

Mr. Smyth: UFC...UFC...that rings a bell...oh, that's right: U Fist Children. Sick freak.

[TTC]

Mr. Smyth: UFC...UFC...that rings a bell...oh, that's right: U Fist Children. Sick freak.

Brock: Yeah cause all the kids today are dumbass. Just like anyone who thinks they are going to win the next tournament when it's going to be me.

[BennyTheBall]

Brock: Yeah cause all the kids today are dumbass. Just like anyone who thinks they are going to win the next tournament when it's going to be me.

Mr. Smyth: Right...well, let's skip past that for a moment and focus on the fact that the picture you're holding there is in fact not you, but Brock Lesnar. Now I'm sure that picture proves to be your lighter fluid when you're 'barbecueing alone', but to claim that is you is...well, it's pretty sad. I almost feel sorry for you.

Almost.

[TTC]

Mr. Smyth: Right...well, let's skip past that for a moment and focus on the fact that the picture you're holding there is in fact not you, but Brock Lesnar. Now I'm sure that picture proves to be your lighter fluid when you're 'barbecueing alone', but to claim that is you is...well, it's pretty sad. I almost feel sorry for you.

Almost.

Brock: You must be high cause that's obviously me.

[BennyTheBall]

Brock: You must be high cause that's obviously me.

Mr. Smyth: You're pathetic.

[TTC]

Mr. Smyth: You're pathetic.

Brock: I ain't the one with a paper plate title and a fake title win.

[BennyTheBall]

Brock: I ain't the one with a paper plate title and a fake title win.

Mr. Smyth: No. You're the one walking around with a picture of Brock Lesnar in his wallet.

[TTC]

Mr. Smyth: No. You're the one walking around with a picture of Brock Lesnar in his wallet.

Brock: Still better than claiming and gloatting over a fake title win.

[BennyTheBall]

Mr. Smyth looks at his title. He slaps it a couple of times.

Mr. Smyth: Nope. Feels real to me.

[TTC]

Mr. Smyth looks at his title. He slaps it a couple of times.

Mr. Smyth: Nope. Feels real to me.

Brock: You've finally have lost it Smyth.

[BennyTheBall]

Brock: You've finally have lost it Smyth.

Mr. Smyth: Ok, we seem to be in a bit of a loop here, so I'm gonna go ahead and do something much more interesting, like pick my nose.

[TTC]

Mr. Smyth: Ok, we seem to be in a bit of a loop here, so I'm gonna go ahead and do something much more interesting, like pick my nose.

Brock: That'll be better than watching your stupid wrestling matches. Cause you are the most slow and uncordinated wrestler has that ever stepped into a ring.

[Torphy]

Adonis: Guy, Guys.. lets not argue about which of you is pathetic, and which is an asshole. You're BOTH pathetic assholes! Now could y'all keep the noise down, Malcolm's watchin' 'The Passion' to get a few tips about how to nail someone to a cross.

Hello EGP :cool:

[TTC]

Adonis: Guy, Guys.. lets not argue about which of you is pathetic, and which is an asshole. You're BOTH pathetic assholes! Now could y'all keep the noise down, Malcolm's watchin' 'The Passion' to get a few tips about how to nail someone to a cross.

Hello EGP :cool:

Brock: Who let the bitch in?

[BennyTheBall]

Adonis: Guy, Guys.. lets not argue about which of you is pathetic, and which is an asshole. You're BOTH pathetic assholes! Now could y'all keep the noise down, Malcolm's watchin' 'The Passion' to get a few tips about how to nail someone to a cross.

Hello EGP :cool:

Mr. Smyth: Is...is that KY Jelly I can smell?

[Torphy]

Mr. Smyth: Is...is that KY Jelly I can smell?

Adonis: It's the only thing that relaxes yo' momma.. naw not even Malcolm is cheap enough to go through with a yo' momma joke, he's at least got SOME class. That said though.. Malcolm knows a lot about nailin' a lady or two up against a piece of wood.. with a piece of wood, ahaa!

[BennyTheBall]

Adonis: It's the only thing that relaxes yo' momma.. naw not even Malcolm is cheap enough to go through with a yo' momma joke, he's at least got SOME class. That said though.. Malcolm knows a lot about nailin' a lady or two up against a piece of wood.. with a piece of wood, ahaa!

Damn. You didn't go the way I was expecting. Had a line set up and everything.

You process killer!

[Torphy]

Damn. You didn't go the way I was expecting. Had a line set up and everything.

You process killer!

Torphy Torpherson, Process Killer!

[magglis]

The card for Grand Prix 3 will be posted tomorrow

[magglis]

Grand Prix #3 Rage in the Cage roster:

Artemis Eclipse

Jman

Sagittarius Blue

Chris Divine

Chris Diamond

Avidico

Shaz

Brock Edwards



Quarterfinal Round Steel Cage Match:
Week 1:

Artemis Eclipse vs Avidico


Quarterfinal Round Steel Cage Match:
Week 2:

Jman vs Shaz


Quarterfinal Round Steel Cage Match:
Week 1:

Sagittarius Blue vs Brock Edwards


Quarterfinal Round Steel Cage Match:
Week 2:

Chris Divine vs Chris Diamond




Semifinal Round Steel Cage Match:
Week 3:

Sagittarius Blue or Brock Edwards vs Chris Divine or Chris Diamond


Semifinal Round Steel Cage Match:
Week 3:

Artemis Eclipse or Avidico vs Jman or Shaz

[magglis]

I will send promos assignments after the finals show of GP2

[CricketTragic]

I will send promos assignments after the finals show of GP2

Gotta say two things,

1) Why wasnt I asked to be on the final show lol and,

2) really looking forward to Avidico v Eclipse and Sag v Edwards good luck guys especially Sag V Edwards both of whom were unlucky in EWNGP 1

[magglis]

Gotta say two things,

1) Why wasnt I asked to be on the final show lol and,

2) really looking forward to Avidico v Eclipse and Sag v Edwards good luck guys especially Sag V Edwards both of whom were unlucky in EWNGP 1
I was thinking to have a match between Pamich and the GP2 winner at the finals of GP3

[BennyTheBall]

I was thinking to have a match between Pamich and the GP2 winner at the finals of GP3

Is that not the idea for the grand finals thing?

[magglis]

Is that not the idea for the grand finals thing?
Nah it will be just a preview and also i have to add more things at the finals show because its only one match

[CricketTragic]

I have no objection in that especially if its Kyojin lol

[magglis]

So did you like the card guys?

[thejman93]

So did you like the card guys?

Just saw it. Dig it. Tough road to the final for me. I like that.

[magglis]

Just saw it. Dig it. Tough road to the final for me. I like that.

Haha good because you kinda wanted that:D

[bearkg88]

Just saw it. Dig it. Tough road to the final for me. I like that.

Ditto :D :D :D

[magglis]

Also if anyone is interested to write a match for the show just pm me:)

[NiallF96]

Ditto :D :D :D


Good luck bro :D

[bearkg88]

Good luck bro :D

Divine: Oh shut it other Chris. Divine doesn't need luck. Divine has talent

OOC: Good luck to you too bro. Look forward to writing a promo with you

[TTC]

Divine: Oh shut it other Chris. Divine doesn't need luck. Divine has talent

OOC: Good luck to you too bro. Look forward to writing a promo with you

Brock: Go get lost Divine. Cause this will soon turn into the Brock Edwards Show. Not the "Look Everyone at This Overhyped and Overrated Clown. Who also likes to go by third person" Show.

[wrestlingfan66513]

Our promo for the show is about done and I must say it is one of the most emotional promos I have done and seen Eddie do. Also you all get to find out Hawks real name!

[TTC]

Can't wait to read it!

[CricketTragic]

Our promo for the show is about done and I must say it is one of the most emotional promos I have done and seen Eddie do. Also you all get to find out Hawks real name!


You must really want this title bro good luck cant wait to read

[magglis]

Our promo for the show is about done and I must say it is one of the most emotional promos I have done and seen Eddie do. Also you all get to find out Hawks real name!

I'm sure it will be great looking forward to read it

[wrestlingfan66513]

You must really want this title bro good luck cant wait to read

We both do when you see it, but it's not what you are thinking.

[CricketTragic]

We both do when you see it, but it's not what you are thinking.

I wasnt thinking anything so I hope its not that :)

[magglis]

Slow day today, still waiting for the promo when i get it i will start working on the show. Promo assignments for the GP3 guys will be out tomorrow

[bearkg88]

Posting this now so creative knows.

February 7th to the 15th, i will be around, i might even ic a little, but if you have any promo requests for me for a show that week please get them to me a few days before the 7th, as for 80% of the time of those dates ill be home relaxing on my vacation with no cell service or dsl. Thanks!

[magglis]

Promo assignments are out. Week 1 boys get them ASAP

And has anyone heard from Eddie I'm still waiting his promo for the finals

[BennyTheBall]

Promo assignments are out. Week 1 boys get them ASAP

And has anyone heard from Eddie I'm still waiting his promo for the finals

It's his birthday week. He turned 21. He's either at home fucking some girl up the arse, or he's in prison getting fucked up the arse.

Ah, memories. :p

[magglis]

It's his birthday week. He turned 21. He's either at home fucking some girl up the arse, or he's in prison getting fucked up the arse.

Ah, memories. :p
Yeah i know but i was suppose to have the show up yesterday

[BennyTheBall]

Yeah i know but i was suppose to have the show up yesterday

Has WF done his parts and sent them in?

[magglis]

Has WF done his parts and sent them in?

That's what he told me.

[BennyTheBall]

Get WF to send you his parts. If you don't hear from Eddie in the next few hours, post the show.

I am an advocate that real life takes priority over this fantasy world, but the fantasy world needs to keep on going.

[magglis]

Get WF to send you his parts. If you don't hear from Eddie in the next few hours, post the show.

I am an advocate that real life takes priority over this fantasy world, but the fantasy world needs to keep on going.
Me too but he didn't said me anything about being busy
The sad part is i didn't write the show because i don't have the promo to pick the winner

[No_1eddiefan]

Guys, as Benny said- it's my birthday week! I am sorry for the delay but I won't be able to do the promo until tomorrow.

I completely appreciate Mag holding off on the show and I've only got one more part to do- which will be my main focus tomorrow.

Sorry for any inconvenience caused!

[magglis]

Guys, as Benny said- it's my birthday week! I am sorry for the delay but I won't be able to do the promo until tomorrow.

I completely appreciate Mag holding off on the show and I've only got one more part to do- which will be my main focus tomorrow.

Sorry for any inconvenience caused!
No prob bro i just didn't hear anything from you in days.

Is everything ok?

[No_1eddiefan]

No prob bro i just didn't hear anything from you in days.

Is everything ok?

Yeah everything's fine mate! Just been really busy with my birthday stuff. I didn't expect to be half as busy as I was, otherwise I woulda got things out of the way.

I'll get the promo to you now.

[No_1eddiefan]

Promo sent guys!

[CricketTragic]

Promo sent guys!

You missed the vital question bro?

Is everything ok?

[magglis]

Promo received and looks good:D

[No_1eddiefan]

You missed the vital question bro?

Is everything ok?

Hahaha yeah everything is fine, just been really busy the last few days.

[magglis]

Ok show will be up in a couple hours so make sure to read:)

[magglis]

Full show is up i'm not gonna post the usual form for feedback because its a show with only one match. But it will be nice to read your opinions about the show:)

Also congrats to the GP2 champion:D

[No_1eddiefan]

Great show, great match.

Congratulations to WF! He definitely deserved it over me.

[magglis]

Great show, great match.

Congratulations to WF! He definitely deserved it over me.
Glad you liked the show bro. It was really close but that was probably the best Hawk promo I've read

You are always welcome for GP4. Probably Eddie this time:)

[No_1eddiefan]

Glad you liked the show bro. It was really close but that was probably the best Hawk promo I've read

You are always welcome for GP4. Probably Eddie this time:)

Hahaha we'll see man, might wait til about GP8 ;)

[magglis]

Hahaha we'll see man, might wait til about GP8 ;)
LOL!

It will be nice to have you again bro at any GP you want

[S.E. Zero]

Great show, great match.

Congratulations to WF! He definitely deserved it over me.

I can't help but disagree. Kyojin pulverized Hawk in that promo, he made more of an impact with his words than Hawk.

I'm not saying Hawk did a bad job, but this promo was Kyo all the way. Not being a fanboy or anything of Kyo, just stating my opinion that I feel Kyo should've in fact won.

Hawk did deserve to be put over in a big way by someone of huge note such as Kyojin, but in the Grand Prix where promos are the deciding factor between who wins and loses, I definitely saw Hawk losing. Hawk winning over Kyo in any other place and time, I could see happening one day but today, to me, was just not that day. Nevertheless, what's done is done and Hawk won.

I hope to see Kyojin a Prix again one day and hopefully win it that time around.

[magglis]

I can't help but disagree. Kyojin pulverized Hawk in that promo, he made more of an impact with his words than Hawk.

I'm not saying Hawk did a bad job, but this promo was Kyo all the way. Not being a fanboy or anything of Kyo, just stating my opinion that I feel Kyo should've in fact won.

Hawk did deserve to be put over in a big way by someone of huge note such as Kyojin, but in the Grand Prix where promos are the deciding factor between who wins and loses, I definitely saw Hawk losing. Hawk winning over Kyo in any other place and time, I could see happening one day but today, to me, was just not that day. Nevertheless, what's done is done and Hawk won.

I hope to see Kyojin a Prix again one day and hopefully win it that time around.

I appreciate it, you took some time and shared your opinions with us :)

[No_1eddiefan]

I can't help but disagree. Kyojin pulverized Hawk in that promo, he made more of an impact with his words than Hawk.

I'm not saying Hawk did a bad job, but this promo was Kyo all the way. Not being a fanboy or anything of Kyo, just stating my opinion that I feel Kyo should've in fact won.

Hawk did deserve to be put over in a big way by someone of huge note such as Kyojin, but in the Grand Prix where promos are the deciding factor between who wins and loses, I definitely saw Hawk losing. Hawk winning over Kyo in any other place and time, I could see happening one day but today, to me, was just not that day. Nevertheless, what's done is done and Hawk won.

I hope to see Kyojin a Prix again one day and hopefully win it that time around.

Mate, that was the best Hawk promo I've seen. I appreciate the kind words but WF deserved it.

Add on the fact that I held up the show and I'm sure Mags' decision was probably easier than the semi final.

It's okay, Eddie Juarez will come in at some point and win the entire thing ;)

[magglis]

Mate, that was the best Hawk promo I've seen. I appreciate the kind words but WF deserved it.

Add on the fact that I held up the show and I'm sure Mags' decision was probably easier than the semi final.

It's okay, Eddie Juarez will come in at some point and win the entire thing ;)

Not at all you are one of the most consistent guys in the forum so i knew that you had a reason for the delay:)

[S.E. Zero]

Mate, that was the best Hawk promo I've seen. I appreciate the kind words but WF deserved it.

Add on the fact that I held up the show and I'm sure Mags' decision was probably easier than the semi final.

It's okay, Eddie Juarez will come in at some point and win the entire thing ;)

Again not saying it wasn't Hawk's best work, just to me, Kyo's was wayyy better. That might have been a factor in the decision, I can agree. No use being upset about it or anything. What's done is done :) Better luck next time as Juarez or Kyo.

[magglis]

Again not saying it wasn't Hawk's best work, just to me, Kyo's was wayyy better. That might have been a factor in the decision, I can agree. No use being upset about it or anything. What's done is done :) Better luck next time as Juarez or Kyo.

It wasn't that

[CricketTragic]

Congratulations Hawk great win mate.

Israel: Hey Kyojin I cant wait to meet you in the Champion v Champion match at the final of EWNGP 3... ohh wait Ill have to because you didnt win this

*Israel raises his winners Trophy*

Hawk..... Ill be seeing you real soon

[wrestlingfan66513]

amazing final show mags and I can't believe I won, still shocked.

Eddie did have me for a good majority of the first bits and I am surprised I got picked. I'm positive this won't be the last time I work with Eddie and I hope he wins one of the other tournaments.

[magglis]

amazing final show mags and I can't believe I won, still shocked.

Eddie did have me for a good majority of the first bits and I am surprised I got picked. I'm positive this won't be the last time I work with Eddie and I hope he wins one of the other tournaments.
Glad you enjoyed the show bro in my eyes you are the rightful winner despite Eddie's awesome job in the tournament. I'm also hoping to see another run from Eddie

[magglis]

Week 1 guys i need the promos tomorrow, don't forget that

Also it would be nice to see some IC posts from the GP3 guys

[wrestlingfan66513]

Hawk: I look at the roster in GP3 and all I see are a bunch of guys who could never get the job done in the first place. They come crawling back because with me in the winner's circle, it has become the place to be. The "One man dynasty" will crumble to me when the finals begin and so will the winner of GP3

[TTC]

Hawk: I look at the roster in GP3 and all I see are a bunch of guys who could never get the job done in the first place. They come crawling back because with me in the winner's circle, it has become the place to be. The "One man dynasty" will crumble to me when the finals begin and so will the winner of GP3

Brock: Fuck you. Who cares about you?

[bearkg88]

Week 1 guys i need the promos tomorrow, don't forget that

Also it would be nice to see some IC posts from the GP3 guys

Divine: and it would be nice if you werent such a chumpette....

Speaking of chumpettes...the other chris, the loser chris, mr all the same, never given a second look cause he is such a joke, calls himself diamond in hopes we all dont say he sucks...you get the privilege of facing Divine in round 1. Congrats...you should feel honored

[scribbler_jones]

*Sagittarius Blue stands on the balcony of his hotel room on the fifteenth floor, on his cellphone talking to someone. He looks out at the night sky with the city skyline casting a neon kaleidoscopic rainbow against it.*

Sagittarius Blue: Don't worry, Pisces, everything will be cool. I know... Last time didn't really go my way. But then again, when does it? When does life come up to you and say "Ok, how do you want it?" It never does. And you know what? I'm cool with that. Because I don't wait for life to fit me. I make it go my way.

... I know. I miss you too.

... Don't worry, babes. I'll see you when it's all done. Stay safe, train hard. And babe?

...

... I... I...

... Oh, you have to go? Okay sugar... talk to you later.

*Sagittarius Blue looks at the phone for a moment, then out at the city... thinking about the words he was dying to say on the phone... but just couldn't.

*Then a look of focus and resolve crosses his face. For all is not lost. The war is still ahead... And he remembers advice from a wise friend...

https://encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQ3TT-IAwyBFvwLrAYcPmetzPjO75OU3VPPAdtWYGgQ0rk56_nD

[TTC]

*Sagittarius Blue stands on the balcony of his hotel room on the fifteenth floor, on his cellphone talking to someone. He looks out at the night sky with the city skyline casting a neon kaleidoscopic rainbow against it.*

Sagittarius Blue: Don't worry, Pisces, everything will be cool. I know... Last time didn't really go my way. But then again, when does it? When does life come up to you and say "Ok, how do you want it?" It never does. And you know what? I'm cool with that. Because I don't wait for life to fit me. I make it go my way.

... I know. I miss you too.

... Don't worry, babes. I'll see you when it's all done. Stay safe, train hard. And babe?

...

... I... I...

... Oh, you have to go? Okay sugar... talk to you later.

*Sagittarius Blue looks at the phone for a moment, then out at the city... thinking about the words he was dying to say on the phone... but just couldn't.

*Then a look of focus and resolve crosses his face. For all is not lost. The war is still ahead... And he remembers advice from a wise friend...

https://encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQ3TT-IAwyBFvwLrAYcPmetzPjO75OU3VPPAdtWYGgQ0rk56_nD

*Just then Brock shows up and puts his hand around Sagittarius Blue.*

Brock: 'Sup my loser compadre? Don't worry, soon you'll go back to your "babe" and cry and mown in front of "her". I mean you clearly aren't advancing the first round.

[magglis]

Divine: and it would be nice if you werent such a chumpette....

Speaking of chumpettes...the other chris, the loser chris, mr all the same, never given a second look cause he is such a joke, calls himself diamond in hopes we all dont say he sucks...you get the privilege of facing Divine in round 1. Congrats...you should feel honored

Magglis; Who do you think you call a chumpette. I'm no the one who's getting married :rolleyes:;)

[scribbler_jones]

*Just then Brock shows up and puts his hand around Sagittarius Blue.*

Brock: 'Sup my loser compadre? Don't worry, soon you'll go back to your "babe" and cry and mown in front of "her". I mean you clearly aren't advancing the first round.

*Sagittarius Blue totally flips out and immediately goes into beserker mode...*

Sagittarius Blue: WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING IN MY HOTEL ROOM.

[TTC]

*Sagittarius Blue totally flips out and immediately goes into beserker mode...*

Sagittarius Blue: WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING IN MY HOTEL ROOM.

Brock: Trust me when I say, I'm everywhere. I'm in your dreams, on your T.V. and in your own hotel room. And remember we are sharing this room cause we are buddies.;)

OOC: Creepy....

[scribbler_jones]

Brock: Trust me when I say, I'm everywhere. I'm in your dreams, on your T.V. and in your own hotel room. And remember we are sharing this room cause we are buddies.;)

OOC: Creepy....

Sagittarius Blue: ...

...

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[TTC]

Sagittarius Blue: ...

...

https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTpEfxZBKeFGuSwnBOljQ4gmpde6LIfb kpXA3qt4xkbtPfljhvUCw

Brock: Don't be scared.

[scribbler_jones]

Brock: Don't be scared.

*Sagittarius Blue makes a mighty effort to remain calm and not snap and reach for a weapon... *

Sagittarius Blue: 1 - we are not buddies. 2 - this is MY room. MINE. I reserved it and paid for it. Me, myself, I. Let's try this again. WHAT. THE. FUCK. ARE. YOU. DOING. IN. MY. HOTEL. ROOM.

[TTC]

*Sagittarius Blue makes a mighty effort to remain calm and not snap and reach for a weapon... *

Sagittarius Blue: 1 - we are not buddies. 2 - this is MY room. MINE. I reserved it and paid for it. Me, myself, I. Let's try this again. WHAT. THE. FUCK. ARE. YOU. DOING. IN. MY. HOTEL. ROOM.

Brock: I thought we were pals.:(

[scribbler_jones]

Brock: I thought we were pals.:(

*Sagittarius Blue is now genuinely confused.*

Sagittarius Blue: ... It's amnesia, isn't it?

[TTC]

*Sagittarius Blue is now genuinely confused.*

Sagittarius Blue: ... It's amnesia, isn't it?

Brock: Are you my brother?

[scribbler_jones]

Brock: Are you my brother?

*Sagittarius Blue is officially legit in "What the FUCK???" mode. He is so taken aback that he can't respond right away. All he can think is to not make any sudden moves... *

[magglis]

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[CricketTragic]

Brock: Fuck you. Who cares about you?

Israel: My sentiment exactly

[CricketTragic]

Hawk: I look at the roster in GP3 and all I see are a bunch of guys who could never get the job done in the first place. They come crawling back because with me in the winner's circle, it has become the place to be. The "One man dynasty" will crumble to me when the finals begin and so will the winner of GP3

Israel: So you reveal that your real name is hakuna matuta, you win the EWNGP 2 and think your having a wondeful day? Hawk I am second to none and I assure you sure that whatever you try on this supposed crumbling dynasty and I will show you what Destiny fulfilled is

[bearkg88]

Israel: So you reveal that your real name is hakuna matuta, you win the EWNGP 2 and think your having a wondeful day? Hawk I am second to none and I assure you sure that whatever you try on this supposed crumbling dynasty and I will show you what Destiny fulfilled is

Divine: Destiny fullfilled? You do realize that the only reason you won the first grand prix is because you had people like Brock Edwards and Artemis Eclipse, no real challenge. When you get to the finals, and you have the Grand Prix #2 winner, Mike Hawk, and the inevitable Grand Prix #3 winner, Chris Divine, to face, you won't stand a chance chump

[magglis]

So still nothing from R(ob) and Tnawhat

I got a one part from SJ and one from TTC but TTC told me that he will do more.

But here is the problem today is the freaking deadline and i don't have any promos to start writing the show.

You have to send me your promos asap or i will just rate you from your ic posts(some of you don't even have:p) and this will affect you in the next round


Sorry guys but show must go on and its a show that it can't be delayed

[bearkg88]

So still nothing from R(ob) and Tnawhat

I got a one part from SJ and one from TTC but TTC told me that he will do more.

But here is the problem today is the freaking deadline and i don't have any promos to start writing the show.

You have to send me your promos asap or i will just rate you from your ic posts(some of you don't even have:p) and this will affect you in the next round


Sorry guys but show must go on and its a show that it can't be delayed

You'll have nials an i prolly tomorrow

[magglis]

You'll have nials an i prolly tomorrow

I'm ok with you, you are week 2 you still have till Sunday

[TTC]

I'll try to turn it in by 11 my time.

[wrestlingfan66513]

Divine: Destiny fullfilled? You do realize that the only reason you won the first grand prix is because you had people like Brock Edwards and Artemis Eclipse, no real challenge. When you get to the finals, and you have the Grand Prix #2 winner, Mike Hawk, and the inevitable Grand Prix #3 winner, Chris Divine, to face, you won't stand a chance chump

Hawk: See that Israel, your not even important enough to be a chumpette by Divine. I beat the man who beat Van Hooligan X for a world title on his first try, while you beat Eclipse, the guy who had multiple chances to get the job done but didn't. A little advice, when you enter the finals, get some more experience and then you can talk big.

[magglis]

Still don't have all the promos but i will have them tomorrow

I will be working tomorrow overtime, so i can't work on the show but i will start writing some of it tonight and I'll try finish it Sunday. So show will be posted Sunday/Monday

[magglis]

Show will be up Monday with all the promos or not:)

[TTC]

Brock: So, I see everyone is hiding, since they finally realized I'm winning this damn tournament and they can't do a damn thing about it.

[magglis]

Ok show will be up in a couple hours

[magglis]

Full show is up and feedback is always welcome and it helps me improve my work:). Have to say that the results were also affected from the late promos

Favorite Moment:
Best Match:
Best Promo:
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved:
Did you find the results fair?:
Any Other Constructive Criticism:
Overall Show Grade:

[No_1eddiefan]

Favorite Moment: Blue winning. Both guys put in their all but Blue was the rightful winner.
Best Match: Artemis-Avi
Best Promo: Blue-Brock
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: Definitely the Artemis-Avi promo. Artemis/R(ob) is capable of much, much more, and given the chance- Avi could have been more impressive. And I would have liked to have seen some back and forth.
Did you find the results fair?: Yeah it was fair.
Any Other Constructive Criticism: Apart from the Arti-Avi promo, nothing.
Overall Show Grade: C+, the Artemis-Avi promo really pulled this week's show down.

[magglis]

Favorite Moment: Blue winning. Both guys put in their all but Blue was the rightful winner.
Best Match: Artemis-Avi
Best Promo: Blue-Brock
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: Definitely the Artemis-Avi promo. Artemis/R(ob) is capable of much, much more, and given the chance- Avi could have been more impressive. And I would have liked to have seen some back and forth.
Did you find the results fair?: Yeah it was fair.
Any Other Constructive Criticism: Apart from the Arti-Avi promo, nothing.
Overall Show Grade: C+, the Artemis-Avi promo really pulled this week's show down.


Thanks for taking the time and giving me your feedback:)

[bearkg88]

Mags if u view my posts in other threads, you will see this.

Ok posting this here first, then resposting it in the other efeds im in so the owners/creative know. Here is my plan.

Im working today, tomorrow, and wed. Then im using thursday and friday to compile the ppv, Destined for Immortality and posting it. There is a chance it will go up thursday, but if not, it will be friday. Then i am sending out assignments for the next chaos, and then enjoying my vacation. What that means is, i may or may not be on for the next week, and i might or might not IC. I wont be doing any promos though. So that means if im involved in a promo where im waiting for someone to start, i need it by thursday. For the assignments ive gotten where i start, im doing those after work. Ill be back on and ready to go on feb 17th, a sunday. That is when the first chaos after dfi will be posted by me, and every chaos after that will be posted by torphy

But im going to make a slight exception here. If i advance and know who im going against by next tuesday(the 12th), ill hammer out a promo for ya. Wont be able to from wed to sat

[magglis]

Mags if u view my posts in other threads, you will see this.

Ok posting this here first, then resposting it in the other efeds im in so the owners/creative know. Here is my plan.

Im working today, tomorrow, and wed. Then im using thursday and friday to compile the ppv, Destined for Immortality and posting it. There is a chance it will go up thursday, but if not, it will be friday. Then i am sending out assignments for the next chaos, and then enjoying my vacation. What that means is, i may or may not be on for the next week, and i might or might not IC. I wont be doing any promos though. So that means if im involved in a promo where im waiting for someone to start, i need it by thursday. For the assignments ive gotten where i start, im doing those after work. Ill be back on and ready to go on feb 17th, a sunday. That is when the first chaos after dfi will be posted by me, and every chaos after that will be posted by torphy

But im going to make a slight exception here. If i advance and know who im going against by next tuesday(the 12th), ill hammer out a promo for ya. Wont be able to from wed to sat

If you advance, Divine will face Blue.

Ok bro thanks for the exception

[magglis]

I'm a bit sad that no one except Eddie who is not part of GP3 gave me his feedback

[CricketTragic]

I'm a bit sad that no one except Eddie who is not part of GP3 gave me his feedback


I have been extremely busy bro wit a sick daughter and doing my trial for Rage Writer and promo for DFI

[magglis]

I have been extremely busy bro wit a sick daughter and doing my trial for Rage Writer and promo for DFI

No worries man , its ok i was talking for the current roster

[bearkg88]

I'm a bit sad that no one except Eddie who is not part of GP3 gave me his feedback

You know me bro, I'd give feedback if i could. I quick read the show, as I'm running at 100 miles now haha. Ill try to give feedback soon though

[Rated_R(ob)KO]

I've been having comp problems pretty badly lately and I've been working 12hr shifts As well lol. I'm going to say one major thing and one major thing only...

With every show you do, it gets better and better. Every match has had an "epic" moment so to say. Keep this up man, you're kicking major ass! Congrats to Sagittarius Blue for advancing and also, helluva an encounter between Artemis Eclipse and Avidico who have never competed against each other in any ring except this one. Glad it was here. :) Keep up the great job again dude!

[Rated_R(ob)KO]

And just a quick note... I don't think the show deserved a C+ because of a short promo. Was it an epic promo?? No. Was it THAT bad that as it was put "drug the show down."? No. We worked with what was given to us by Magglis. All he wanted was Artemis to come out, Avidico to come out and go into the match. We gave him what HE wanted because its HIS show. So does it deserve a C+ because of that? No. I give it definitely a B+ to A-... it was solid, matches were great and its what it needed to be. :)

[HolyJose2391]

And just a quick note... I don't think the show deserved a C+ because of a short promo. Was it an epic promo?? No. Was it THAT bad that as it was put "drug the show down."? No. We worked with what was given to us by Magglis. All he wanted was Artemis to come out, Avidico to come out and go into the match. We gave him what HE wanted because its HIS show. So does it deserve a C+ because of that? No. I give it definitely a B+ to A-... it was solid, matches were great and its what it needed to be. :)

You gotta remember now a days apparently long promos=quality promos. apparently

[Rated_R(ob)KO]

You gotta remember now a days apparently long promos=quality promos. apparently

Very well said indeed. Just because its long doesn't mean its epic. Just because people go back and forth 12 times doesn't mean its legen... wait for it... dary. It is what it is. Short promos are just as good. Especially when it gets down to the point and you see what you really waited to see.

[B-MCINTYRE]

Artemis and avidico's promo was perfect for the situation.

[bearkg88]

You gotta remember now a days apparently long promos=quality promos. apparently

I disagree. To me, its the right balance of both. Knowing when your in the moment writing and it just clicks and it will convey an emotion to the reader, and knowing when you have to keep it a little juicy but not lambaste the promo with garbage.

So ill give a quick feedback for the latest shows. Both matches were really good matches, so kudos to maggs if he wrote both. The brock/blue promo was decent also. As for avidico and eclipse, i say this, and when i do its not a smack at rob or tnawhat. If this was a dream match, the promo just felt like it didnt convey the emotion. It didnt have me reading it and going, "man, i cant wait to read this, i have no idea who is going to win the match". That is where my point of length doesnt matter, it comes to content. Less doesnt equal better always and more doesnt always mean better. I would give this show a b-

[HolyJose2391]

Very well said indeed. Just because its long doesn't mean its epic. Just because people go back and forth 12 times doesn't mean its legen... wait for it... dary. It is what it is. Short promos are just as good. Especially when it gets down to the point and you see what you really waited to see.
exactly it all depends on what you're given and can't be forced out but when I see a length requirement I'm just like "the hell?"

[magglis]

I disagree. To me, its the right balance of both. Knowing when your in the moment writing and it just clicks and it will convey an emotion to the reader, and knowing when you have to keep it a little juicy but not lambaste the promo with garbage.

So ill give a quick feedback for the latest shows. Both matches were really good matches, so kudos to maggs if he wrote both. The brock/blue promo was decent also. As for avidico and eclipse, i say this, and when i do its not a smack at rob or tnawhat. If this was a dream match, the promo just felt like it didnt convey the emotion. It didnt have me reading it and going, "man, i cant wait to read this, i have no idea who is going to win the match". That is where my point of length doesnt matter, it comes to content. Less doesnt equal better always and more doesnt always mean better. I would give this show a b-

Yes I'm working solo now.

Thanks for the feedback Bear and R(ob)

Now here is the plan for the next show. I'm gonna start working on it today, Thursday and Friday i will be very busy so i will try to finish it Saturday if i can't do that then i will finish it Sunday. Show will be up Sunday for sure

[magglis]

So it looks like that the show will be up Sunday and it will be a good one.

Also promo assignments for the semis will go out that night

[magglis]

Tonight's show will be awesome boys make sure to read it:D

[NiallF96]

Tonight's show will be awesome boys make sure to read it:D

Cant wait, will be EPIC. I promise to post a review this time :p

[thejman93]

FYI, guys, Shaz and I wrote our promo before IWA Destined For Immortality. Keep that in mind as you read it. Essentially, pretend the show that's going up today was taped last Sunday.

[magglis]

FYI, guys, Shaz and I wrote our promo before IWA Destined For Immortality. Keep that in mind as you read it. Essentially, pretend the show that's going up today was taped last Sunday.

Yeah i was going to post that now lol

Good job J:p

[thejman93]

Yeah i was going to post that now lol

Good job J:p

I try, Mags, I try. :D

[magglis]

Are you ready?:D

[magglis]

Full show is up and feedback is always welcome and it helps me improve my work:).

Favorite Moment:
Best Match:
Best Promo:
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved:
Did you find the results fair?:
Any Other Constructive Criticism:
Overall Show Grade:

[thejman93]

Favorite Moment: Divine's wild Divine Intervention. Crazy spot.

Best Match: Shaz-Me.

Best Promo: Divine-Diamond

Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: Shaz and I could've done better, reading it back.

Did you find the results fair?: Yeah, I think so. Both matches, if you're grading on promos, were tossups.

Any Other Constructive Criticism: Nope.

Overall Show Grade: B

[No_1eddiefan]

Favorite Moment: Jman picking up the win.
Best Match: Jman-Shaz
Best Promo: Gotta go with Divine-Diamond. Both guys put their all in.
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: Both promos and matches were top quality.
Did you find the results fair?: Yeah, I felt that both matches could have gone either way.
Any Other Constructive Criticism: Nothing to say really.
Overall Show Grade: A. Another quality show.

[NiallF96]

Favorite Moment: Divine's Divine Intervention

Best Match: Jman-Shaz

Best Promo: I gotta go with me and Divine. I know I gave it my all, and Bear was fuckin awesome!

Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: No, although I coulda won :p

Did you find the results fair?: I really couldn't comment, I thought all four promos were excellent tbh

Any Other Constructive Criticism: Nope :)

Overall Show Grade: A. Great show, really got proper invested cause of my match I guess, and normally, when I'm not involved or am not interested in the other match, I skim thru it, but the Jman-Shaz I found myself digesting everything and picturing it in my head, which I guess is what e fedding's all about right? Making people invest in a product like this, and I will defs sign up next time (if I have time LOL) ;)

[magglis]

Thanks for the feedback guys. Really means a lot

[magglis]

Deadline is tomorrow guys. So lets get some promos in.

[bearkg88]

Divine: So Divine is facing Sagittarius Blue. Saggy Blue Balls, the guy that made Divine tap out just a short bit ago. Well....payback is a bitch Bluesy...just remember that

[thejman93]

Divine: So Divine is facing Sagittarius Blue. Saggy Blue Balls, the guy that made Divine tap out just a short bit ago. Well....payback is a bitch Bluesy...just remember that

Jman: I'll be waiting, Chris.

[magglis]

Promos are all in.:D

I'm working on the show as we speak:)

[magglis]

50% of the show is done. If i don't finish it tonight then i will be able to write the rest Sunday.

So show will probably be up Sunday night

[magglis]

Quick question, do you want to see another GP with gimmick matches. If yes what match type?

[B-MCINTYRE]

Quick question, do you want to see another GP with gimmick matches. If yes what match type?
Ravens clockwork house of fun matches.

[No_1eddiefan]

Quick question, do you want to see another GP with gimmick matches. If yes what match type?

How about a simply hardcore orientated GP with several different gimmick matches involved?

[magglis]

How about a simply hardcore orientated GP with several different gimmick matches involved?

I was thinking to do that but what comes next after a GP like that?

[No_1eddiefan]

I was thinking to do that but what comes next after a GP like that?

Back to normal. Or a submission based GP. Something less hardcore.

[Rated_R(ob)KO]

Ravens clockwork house of fun

I'd like to see that match in a Hardcore themed one. Also, if that were the case... count The Butcher in.

[magglis]

Back to normal. Or a submission based GP. Something less hardcore.

I'll think about it, thanks bro. You are always helpful:)

I'm just gonna wait to see what others have to say. Hopefully get a response this time from others

[Rated_R(ob)KO]

I would definitely do Hardcore, then submission, then back to normal. Slow progression back to normal from WAY out there to submitting to regular. And by the time the three gimmick ones are done (Cage, Hardcore, Submission) people will want to get back to normal anyway I believe.

[magglis]

I would definitely do Hardcore, then submission, then back to normal. Slow progression back to normal from WAY out there to submitting to regular. And by the time the three gimmick ones are done (Cage, Hardcore, Submission) people will want to get back to normal anyway I believe.
Makes sense

I was thinking to do one GP with the users pick their matches

[Rated_R(ob)KO]

Makes sense

I was thinking to do one GP with the users pick their matches

Pick the matches would be hard in a tournament setting. Maybe pick the competitors? Like, get a list of 24 guys and have them dwindled down by votes or something like that. So the tournament brackets are completely user generated.

[magglis]

Pick the matches would be hard in a tournament setting. Maybe pick the competitors? Like, get a list of 24 guys and have them dwindled down by votes or something like that. So the tournament brackets are completely user generated.

I made a thread for the next GP!!:)

[magglis]

Just letting you know that show is done but i can't post it right now because I'm not home. I'll probably post it later tonight. Show looks good, probably the best one so far

[Rated_R(ob)KO]

Just letting you know that show is done but i can't post it right now because I'm not home. I'll probably post it later tonight. Show looks good, probably the best one so far

Completely cool dude. Show should be fantastic!

[magglis]

Yeah i had my family in my house for dinner, that's why show isn't up yet. Should be up in one hour though

[bearkg88]

Yeah i had my family in my house for dinner, that's why show isn't up yet. Should be up in one hour though

Looking forward to reading it :D

[magglis]

Full show is up and feedback is always welcome and it helps me improve my work:).

Favorite Moment:
Best Match:
Best Promo:
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved:
Did you find the results fair?:
Any Other Constructive Criticism:
Overall Show Grade:

Congrats to the winners and a big thanks to all the guys who participate in this tournament, i really appreciate it.

[No_1eddiefan]

Favorite Moment: Jman & Eclipse's shoot-ish.
Best Match: Jman-Eclipse
Best Promo: Jman-Eclipse
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: I would have liked to have seen Blue & Divine in the ring together but their promos were great regardless.
Did you find the results fair?: I think Divine was the rightful winner but for Jman-Eclipse, that really could have gone either way. I had Eclipse winning but J winning is something that always makes me happy so I don't mind.
Any Other Constructive Criticism: Nothing at all man.
Overall Show Grade: A. Another great show!

[bearkg88]

Favorite Moment: The very ending of Divine coming out, and the staredown. I'm pumped for this final more than any other
Best Match: Jman vs Eclipse
Best Promo: Jman vs Eclipse easily!
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: None
Did you find the results fair?: Yes. Jman/Eclipse could have gone either way
Any Other Constructive Criticism: None
Overall Show Grade: A

Divine: So...it's Divine vs Jman. A rematch from HWA, a number of months ago. Jman, before, you humbled the Divine One...in this final round, Divine shows you what he has learned since we last fought

[magglis]

Favorite Moment: Jman & Eclipse's shoot-ish.
Best Match: Jman-Eclipse
Best Promo: Jman-Eclipse
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: I would have liked to have seen Blue & Divine in the ring together but their promos were great regardless.
Did you find the results fair?: I think Divine was the rightful winner but for Jman-Eclipse, that really could have gone either way. I had Eclipse winning but J winning is something that always makes me happy so I don't mind.
Any Other Constructive Criticism: Nothing at all man.
Overall Show Grade: A. Another great show!

Ah yeah that was because Bear was out for a few days and i sent him the promo assignment earlier

[magglis]

Ok guys we have full roster and bios. You can check the roster thread to see the characters. Before i book the matches i want from you to pick your poison for the tournament. Name one or two users/characters that you want to face in this tournament and I'll see what i can do:)

[eyehatecena]

one of my choices as an opponent- Vandarius- will pick another tonight aswell as type of match

[S.E. Zero]

Ok guys we have full roster and bios. You can check the roster thread to see the characters. Before i book the matches i want from you to pick your poison for the tournament. Name one or two users/characters that you want to face in this tournament and I'll see what i can do:)

Only guy that comes to mind right now as to who would a good 1st round matchup for Slayde is Shaz in FCA, to really have some fun just brawling. Stupid Grind not choosing Carlin.....:p

[magglis]

Good to know guys, I'll wait to see what the rest have to say

[No_1eddiefan]

Ok guys we have full roster and bios. You can check the roster thread to see the characters. Before i book the matches i want from you to pick your poison for the tournament. Name one or two users/characters that you want to face in this tournament and I'll see what i can do:)

I honestly don't mind. I'll face anybody.

[Vandarius]

Ok guys we have full roster and bios. You can check the roster thread to see the characters. Before i book the matches i want from you to pick your poison for the tournament. Name one or two users/characters that you want to face in this tournament and I'll see what i can do:)

Juarez, Butcher, or Slayde vs. Darius would be epic as hell.

[magglis]

Juarez, Butcher, or Slayde vs. Darius would be epic as hell.

Good to know anyone else?:)

[CricketTragic]

Good to know guys, I'll wait to see what the rest have to say

Bro my guys a noob he dont care who he faces

[magglis]

No one else? If so i will post the card with the match stipulations tomorrow

[Grind_Bastard]

No one else? If so i will post the card with the match stipulations tomorrow

Already told ya, bro.

[magglis]

Roster:

Sloth

Mr Torture

Shaz

Orion Slayde

The Butcher

Chase Blaydes

Darius

Eddie Juarez

EWN Grand Prix 4: Lust for Pain card:

Quarterfinal round Tables match:
Week 1:

Sloth vs Mr Torture

Quarterfinal round Falls Count Anywhere match:
Week 1:

Shaz vs Orion Slayde

Quarterfinal round First Blood match:
Week 2:

The Butcher vs Chase Blaydes

Quarterfinal round Ladders match:
Week 2:

Eddie Juarez vs Darius


Semifinal round Steel Cage match:
Week 3:

Sloth or Mr Torture vs The Butcher vs Chase Blaydes

Semifinal round Hell in a Cell match:
Week 3:

Eddie Juarez or Darius vs Shaz vs Orion Slayde


Finals TLC match:
Week 4:

Winner A vs Winner B

[No_1eddiefan]

Roster:

Sloth

Mr Torture

Shaz

Orion Slayde

The Butcher

Chase Blaydes

Darius

Eddie Juarez

EWN Grand Prix 4: Lust for Pain card:

Quarterfinal round Tables match:
Week 1:

Sloth vs Mr Torture

Quarterfinal round Falls Count Anywhere match:
Week 1:

Shaz vs Orion Slayde

Quarterfinal round First Blood match:
Week 2:

The Butcher vs Chase Blaydes

Quarterfinal round Ladders match:
Week 2:

Eddie Juarez vs Darius


Semifinal round Steel Cage match:
Week 3:

Sloth or Mr Torture vs The Butcher vs Chase Blaydes

Semifinal round Hell in a Cell match:
Week 3:

Eddie Juarez or Darius vs Shaz vs Orion Slayde


Finals TLC match:
Week 4:

Winner A vs Winner B

Darius ay?

Eddie Juarez: The current TWE World Champion? Well Darius, you're lucky that title isn't on the line esse, otherwise I'd be taking it.

[S.E. Zero]

Quarterfinal round Falls Count Anywhere match:

Shaz vs Orion Slayde

HELL Fucking YEAH!!!! We gonna tear the house down with this one. Looking forward to working with you, Shaz :)

[Vandarius]

Darius ay?

Eddie Juarez: The current TWE World Champion? Well Darius, you're lucky that title isn't on the line esse, otherwise I'd be taking it.

Darius: That's cute. No one else has been able to defeat me in specialty matches as of late, what makes you any different?

[No_1eddiefan]

Darius: That's cute. No one else has been able to defeat me in specialty matches as of late, what makes you any different?

Eddie Juarez: What makes me different? How about the fact that I am the Most Dangerous Man in the World? How about the fact that of all these people you claim to have beaten recently, the name Eddie Juarez is not one of them? Keep underestimating me Darius, that'll be your first mistake.

[CricketTragic]

Roster:

Sloth

Mr Torture

Shaz

Orion Slayde

The Butcher

Chase Blaydes

Darius

Eddie Juarez

EWN Grand Prix 4: Lust for Pain card:

Quarterfinal round Tables match:
Week 1:

Sloth vs Mr Torture

Quarterfinal round Falls Count Anywhere match:
Week 1:

Shaz vs Orion Slayde

Quarterfinal round First Blood match:
Week 2:

The Butcher vs Chase Blaydes

Quarterfinal round Ladders match:
Week 2:

Eddie Juarez vs Darius


Semifinal round Steel Cage match:
Week 3:

Sloth or Mr Torture vs The Butcher vs Chase Blaydes

Semifinal round Hell in a Cell match:
Week 3:

Eddie Juarez or Darius vs Shaz vs Orion Slayde


Finals TLC match:
Week 4:

Winner A vs Winner B

Chase: Hang on a minute? Im taking on a butcher in a first blood match? Are we carving pork chops from fresh pig or having a match?

[magglis]

J and Bear remember today is the deadline for the promo so come on boys bring the stuff in

[CricketTragic]

J and Bear remember today is the deadline for the promo so come on boys bring the stuff in

Israel: If not I have an emergency promo to steal season 3 whaa haa haaa

[bearkg88]

J and Bear remember today is the deadline for the promo so come on boys bring the stuff in

I wanna shoot a quick apology to mags. Jman and i have both been busy this week and i was sick on thur/fri with diahreah. I figured j would have finished it off when he got it to me late fri but left it open for me to finish. I have to head into work but ill be done in roughly 12 hrs when i can finish it off. Again, i apologize but being sick sucks.

[bearkg88]

Correction, guess im not going into work for a few hrs so ill finish asap

[magglis]

Correction, guess im not going into work for a few hrs so ill finish asap

Sounds good.

The GP4 guys. If you don't get promo assignment tonight you will get one tomorrow night.

[bearkg88]

Sounds good.

The GP4 guys. If you don't get promo assignment tonight you will get one tomorrow night.


promo is in! I think it's a good one. Especially the last part :D

[bearkg88]

Divine: That feeling of metal against your skin, the blood dripping down your face, your face scraping against the metal...Jman...Divine hopes you love those feelings...because that's what's to come when we step into the ring. Divine vs Jman II.....

[magglis]

promo is in! I think it's a good one. Especially the last part :D

Promo looks good we will have a show tomorrow:D

[bearkg88]

Promo looks good we will have a show tomorrow:D

I'm intrigued to see what people say about the last part :D

[magglis]

I'm intrigued to see what people say about the last part :D

Yup everyone owns themselves to read tomorrow's show.

Its Jman vs Divine in the finals of GP in a freaking Cage!!!:D

[bearkg88]

Yup everyone owns themselves to read tomorrow's show.

Its Jman vs Divine in the finals of GP in a freaking Cage!!!:D

:D I'm pumped to read it. In my eyes, it could go either way

Divine: Jman....Divine wishes you the best of luck...you'll need it

[magglis]

Already started writing the show and the match. Its gonna be good.:D

[magglis]

Promos assignments for the GP4 guys are out:)

[bearkg88]

Man no one has taken post 100 yet

[bearkg88]

So its mine :)