Speaking of which, I better go write one now.Quote:
Originally Posted by THE HEARTBREAK KID
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Speaking of which, I better go write one now.Quote:
Originally Posted by THE HEARTBREAK KID
Right.. I'm off guys, Enjoy the show and speak to you all tomorrow :) Chow!
Alright I'm back, and RAW is WAR will be going up!
So RAW is finally up guys! Remember to use the feedback form on the first page.
Don't have time to do a lot of feedback- but great show all around. A lot of really great promos- can not really pick a fav though. And really glad to see the tag team division and the womens division thriving.
Grade: B+
*Bobby Roode and James Storm are both in the backstage area. They are seen having a conversation, but the cameraman doesn't seem to mind and begins to over hear their chatter.*
Bobby: Man, what went wrong. We had this match in the bag. We are about to get the winning money from that match.
Storm: Hey, don't forget I get my cut for my beer man.
Bobby: We lost.
Storm: Oh yeah. We have to think outside the box here man. We need to find a way to get those tag titles. Come on lets put our noggins together.
*Both James and Bobby begin to ponder around awhile. They seem to both getting a bit frustrating. Just then James grabs a beer and gets an immediate idea.*
James: I got it man.
Bobby: Well, spit it out man.
James: I'm not spitting out my beer.
Bobby: Not that. The freaking idea, brotha.
James: Oh yeah. Well, it came to me easily. What are some things the supposed Tag Team Champions have been doing for a lot.
Bobby: Well, Dolph cheers a lot for his boyfriend, since he is an ex-cheerleader. While, Swagger says American a lot. Is that it?
James: Nope. The answer is Dolph moves his hips a lot. So, one of us has to do it. That way we can get over.
Bobby: Da fuq? How is moving your hips going to get us over. *Bobby then imitates Dolph's signature hip movement.* See? I'm not over at all.
James: But it was funny.
Bobby: True. What about Swagger?
James: Well Swagger has his lisps, so management probably feels bad for the poor lad that they gave him the titles. Maybe if we pretend we have some sort of lisps or something similar we might get a title shot.
Bobby: I rather do the hip thing than sound really stupid. Can anyone even understand what that dweeb is saying.
James: No, but he does have something we want badly. The Tag Titles, so him and Ziggler have to have something up their sleeves.
Bobby: I got it. Why didn't I realize it before? It's so obvious. All American Perfection have management wrapped around their dirty fingers. I mean I'm the Professional IT Factor of Professional Wrestling.
James: And I'm The (Tennessee) Cowboy. Come one, you combine us together we are the best tag team that has ever existed.
Bobby: Don't forget we are both former TNA World Champions. That speaks for itself.
James: So, I think we have to kiss management's ass. I mean it worked for Cena.:rolleyes:
Bobby: No man. We can do better than.
James: How about this one. We kick everyone's ass. Anyone who steps on our goal to being the rightful champions.
Bobby: Don't forget the face of this tag division. A tag team the crowd can actually get behind and support.
James: It's a done deal. No one will stop us from this day on.
Bobby: And we'll be the real deal. Not some fools like Prime Time Player. Do Darren Young and Titus O'Neil even talk at all?
James: Don't forget we'll show our dominance against some guys who are real competitors; The World Greatest Tag Team. How ever just like Motor City Machine Guns, they will be nothing like us.
Bobby: And we will beat the shit out of those hooligans called Kings of Wrestling.
James: They don't even have crowns, so they aren't royalty like Jerry "The King" Lawler.
Bobby: Speaking of Lawler. I heard he wanted to party with us. How about we go find him?
James: Let's go man.
*Both men start walking looking for The King. However, James goes back to where Beer Money was. He had forgotten his case of beer. He grabs the beer and hugs. He begins to kiss it a bit. Storm can be heard saying "I love you baby. If I could marry you I would." Just as he finishes that sentence he sees the cameraman with the camera on. He then runs over to the cameraman, but at the same time the cameraman starts running for his life. James starts to hear Bobby yelling for him, so Storm decides to head back to his tag partner.*
I just sent the next phase of the Raven promo. I hope my last promo/bit with him(for awhile- at least hopefully) is evil enough on next RAW
I noticed that the Teddy and Eve promo we wrote wasn't included in the show. Was that an accident or was it decided to not be used?Quote:
Originally Posted by G.G.G.
Couple things before I give my feedback later. KOW theme was wrong.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PIW6HC5N914
^ That's the theme that we're using.
Also it's not the Helicopter Crash anymore. As stated in the Kings bio on page 19 of the roster thread, it's the same move now called King's Landing.
You really gotta keep up with some of the changes made in our versions of the characters since they may not be the same as the ones the real wrestlers use in real life.
Ex. I know Rollins (or as I use him, Black) wont use the Blackout since that's a move I decided to add to his repertoire that I felt would make him more unique here in the WWE fed vs how he is portrayed in the real WWE. It's really a matter of using the info in the bios we made vs the real ones.
That's where we put our own spin on the Superstar or Diva to be used and the moves that will be used in our eyes while under your direction. So hopefully, that can improve as time goes on.
I agree with Zero without sounding bossy or mean. My version of Eve doesn't have her current WWE finisher (which I don't like), but does have some of her previous finishers even though I saw her end a match here with her WWE finisher. This part is small, but my version of Trish has brown hair so I don't want to have blonde pictures of her used when she has a match or promo so it won't be more confusing alternating between the 2 colors, but I pretty much always provide a picture with my promos.