Maybe bear needs a new category in his format then :)
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Naw. Talking about it here on the main board will get Bear's attention enough for him to decide if adding a new category in his requests for future feedback is a good decision or not. I certainly think it is but it's his decision at the end of the day. Just glad I'm able to help as I like to speak on things some others might not like in this instance the styling of the show
Some users tend to be too nice or not let a creative team have it in terms of feedback like they should but then how do they expect for things to improve if they don't? Someone has to say: "The show sucked ass and you need better promos or blah blah", when some of the others are like: "That was a good show, loved the show and whatnot" when they at times don't really mean it. That's just my two cents.
Best Match: Shaz vs Dixon. Should've been the show ender, tho.
Best Promo: Love reading CAR. Always entertaining.
Best Piece of Booking: The dissension in the Infection. Could an AJ Dixon face turn be coming???
Best Debut(When Applicable): Juno Mercury (Love the two Greek God names btw)
Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: No Smyth/Kyo promo and no Rob Rage whatsoever.
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: meh. not really.
Overall Show Grade: B+
Also, did Jose leave the fed and I miss it? Or is it just storyline?
Best Match: DG/Infection. I loved the way it was put together, and the writing style just sucked me right in.
Best Promo: Elric/Slayde Loving the way this feud has developed, and this promo did a great job of showcasing why it matters.
Best Piece of Booking: the new, finally getting his hands dirty, Mr. Smyth I have been a Smyth fan since the start, and this was a great twist that I did not see coming, loved every bit of it. (Also I enjoyed that there wasn't another Kyo/Smyth promo, don't get me wrong they have been awesome, but the way that was done had me howling with glee, and quite frankly no matter how spectacular the show, there is only so much originality possible when you have the same two men promo it out each week.)
Best Debut(When Applicable): Juno Mercury, glad to see that we are finally getting a working female division in an e-fed, and even one where not every one involved is a guy :) Also a great contribution to cap off the Bombshell promo, all in all a good vibe.
Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: Heavyweight title match getting kicked out of the ME spot by a squash, no matter how fun the squash, just doesn't feel right to me, y'know? Personally I would have done the Kyo/Smyth bit, Smyth's squash, then the Jman Shaz promos, leading to the match, ending with Smokey's announcement for his next opponent. but that is just me.
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved:
Any Other Positives: Loving the new direction with Shining/Adonis, looking forward to seeing the next chapter there.
Any Other Constructive Criticism: Format wise, It would make more sense to me to match all actions to one format, and all spoken words to another. for example
Wrestler Guy: I'm Gonna Kick Your Ass!
Wrestler Man: Nu Uh, I'm gonna kick Your Ass!
Wrestler guy slaps Wrestler man, who goes down like a little bitch
Commentary Dude: Wow, he totally kicked his ass.
*The match over, Wrestler guy walks away, contemplating the many ass-kickings in his future.*
is what it looks like now, unifying it all however could make it look this pretty
Wrestler Guy: I'm Gonna Kick Your Ass!
Wrestler Man: Nu Uh, I'm gonna kick Your Ass!
*Wrestler guy slaps Wrestler man, who goes down like a little bitch*
Commentary Dude: Wow, he totally kicked his ass.
*The match over, Wrestler guy walks away, contemplating the many ass-kickings in his future.*
Not saying that it has to be that format, mind, I just think that picking one for each would make it easier to read, and really make it take less time to post (that has been my experience at least) If it doesn't make sense, I will try to clarify later.
Overall Show Grade: I'm not grading you, I'm not your teacher :P