IWA: Insane Wrestling Association

Also, please provide feedback!(this includes you Vand). This helps us know where we need to improve, or where we are doing great. Thanks! Also, i've been keeping track, so it does matter if you provide feedback or not

Best Match:
Best Promo:
Best Piece of Booking:
Best Debut(When Applicable):
Best Line of Commentary:
Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like:
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved:
Any Other Positives:
Any Constructive Criticism:
Anything you did not like or felt was sub par:
Overall Show Grade

Also, I'm off to bed, so hope to see all kinds of replies in the morning! Adios!

Awesome way to start my birthday, Chaos! :D I'll have feedback ina while

Best Match: Fatal 4 Way. Great way to feature a lot of Maximum Anarchy participants.

Best Promo: There were many. Shining, Jman, mine and Krysys, Benny, Eddie, hell the list could go on and on. Promos were excellent all around.

Best Piece of Booking: Featuring Black Blooded as much as they in both the promos and the 2 matches they were part of on this show.

Best Debut(When Applicable): Were none so =/

Best Line of Commentary: Gotta look back and decide on that.

Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: Not featuring any female wrestling action. You got the division. The talent and you got the champion in Vivica. It needs to be featured.

Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: Nope

Any Other Positives: The styling of the show really, really helped to make the promos pop and be a great focal point to the eyes which made it that much better to read the promos and become engaged with them.

Any Constructive Criticism: Not at the present moment but I'll let creative know otherwise.

Anything you did not like or felt was sub par: Not on this show, the build up for Destined for Immortality has been great so far and looks to get better as time goes on.

Overall Show Grade: B+ / A-

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by S.E. Zero

Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: Not featuring any female wrestling action. You got the division. The talent and you got the champion in Vivica. It needs to be featured.

---

What about Juno Mercury winning the no.1 contenders match?

Best Match: Loved the fatal four way and the ending to it. The 24 video playing again raises more questions!

Best Promo: So many to choose from, but i'm gonna give this as a tie between Shining Light(His best promo to date) and Slayde and Elric!

Best Piece of Booking: The crucifixion for sure! That just takes this already amazing feud to another level! (I played a part in the idea myself so i'm rather proud of that :p)

Best Debut(When Applicable): N/A

Best Line of Commentary: Mr Smyth stating that he used to like Rocky and had even told him his first name haha.

Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: A few people got double booked in matches, now that's not actually too bad really but it's the only thing I can poke holes in.

Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: I want to see more and longer Layman promos, Destruction cracks me up with his character haha.

Any Other Positives: My last comment ignored, every promo was good and fun to read. People are maintaining this good run we've got going.

Any Constructive Criticism: Promos are good, matches are good, booking is solid and the shows are always up in a timely fashion. So i can't really criticise anything haha.

Anything you did not like or felt was sub par: As Dean Ambrose would say. Nope!

Overall Show Grade: A

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by Torphy

Best Match: Loved the fatal four way and the ending to it. The 24 video playing again raises more questions!

Best Promo: So many to choose from, but i'm gonna give this as a tie between Shining Light(His best promo to date) and Slayde and Elric!

Best Piece of Booking: The crucifixion for sure! That just takes this already amazing feud to another level! (I played a part in the idea myself so i'm rather proud of that :p)

Best Debut(When Applicable): N/A

Best Line of Commentary: Mr Smyth stating that he used to like Rocky and had even told him his first name haha.

Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: A few people got double booked in matches, now that's not actually too bad really but it's the only thing I can poke holes in.

Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: I want to see more and longer Layman promos, Destruction cracks me up with his character haha.
Any Other Positives: My last comment ignored, every promo was good and fun to read. People are maintaining this good run we've got going.

Any Constructive Criticism: Promos are good, matches are good, booking is solid and the shows are always up in a timely fashion. So i can't really criticise anything haha.

Anything you did not like or felt was sub par: As Dean Ambrose would say. Nope!

Overall Show Grade: A

---

Yeah, it would've been longer, but I was tired, and I had a couple of hours to the deadline, and had to write a match for the WWE Fed. A shame the one I almost forgot to do and rushed, was the one with the title match :/. Still, I've done a hell of a lot shorter and worse promos in the past.

But cheers dude :)

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by Destruction

Yeah, it would've been longer, but I was tired, and I had a couple of hours to the deadline, and had to write a match for the WWE Fed. A shame the one I almost forgot to do and rushed, was the one with the title match :/. Still, I've done a hell of a lot shorter and worse promos in the past.

But cheers dude :)

---

Heh no worries it wasn't even criticism, was more of a compliment in all honesty about wanting to see more Laymen! :D

Best Match: Fatal 4 way
Best Promo: Gotta give it to JMan
Best Piece of Booking: Like Torphy said, the crucifixion match... I can tell it's going to be a big finish to what I've been told is a big feud
Best Debut(When Applicable): N/A
Best Line of Commentary: Will check later, rest assured all commentary was great and just the right amount
Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: Like SEZ said, lack of female action
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: Nope
Any Other Positives: Good work all from everyone, IWA is one of if not the most consistent fed on eWN
Any Constructive Criticism: I suppose the fluency in my match with Cage got me confused. Like, near the end it was something along the lines of "Shining counters with a roll up, but Cage counters that but then Shining counters that". May seem a bit nit-picky but it just seemed like the action was going a bit too fast and jumpy
Anything you did not like or felt was sub par: Nope
Overall Show Grade - A

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by Destruction

What about Juno Mercury winning the no.1 contenders match?

---

It was there and wasn't there. The match wasn't a highlight to the division itself so to speak. It was just like here's a title shot on the line, fight. Very few Bombshell promos to really hype up the fact that match was going to happen and therefore get excited to see it That's why it was a bit disappointing to not see them featured as best they should especially the champion herself, Vivica, who could've done some kind of confrontation promo backstage with Juno to really make that feud pop early on en route to DFI.

Mercury was expected to win since she's hot of her debut and is an actual girl aside from Glamour Girl who here plays 2 of them that essentially work better as a duo than in singles action. Pink would've been a surprise to see win she's such a unique character and in my mind would've made the finish a surprise since again in my mind Mercury was expected to win.

Some matchups right from the minute you see them you kinda know who's expected going to win and I like to be surprised at times as the end draws near.

Like having Pink essentially have the match won by pinning Spice after she hit her and right at the 2 count here comes Juno with a dropkick that leaves Pink out of it before she tries to steal the win and you see the count going 1, 2 and Spice kicks out of nowhere (showing great heart by doing so). Keeping the match going enough for Juno to pick up Spice hit her finisher on her before say Sugar tried to avenge her partner getting demolished only to fall to the same fate herself by being thrown out of the ring or being hit with a finisher by Juno leaving her and Spice in the ring out cold before she pins either girl and wins the match.That vs a roll up finish might've been a difference in that match getting the attention it and the division itself can get heading into DFI.

Maybe I'm just nit picking lol but those are my thoughts :D

In regards to them being featured, i have this to say. 1) i myself wrote the match and felt there was more detail in it than a few of the other matches that were done, 2) last week there was all 5 bombshells involved in a promo, to give me a chance to see them all meshed together and who i thought would make for a good match going into dfi. As for the ending, i went with a roll up as in my eyes, i view juno as they fresh on the scene bombshell. She is new, and used her newness to an advantage by surprising her opponent with a roll up for the win,

As for your point on seeing vivica confront juno, i decided to go with a juno only promo as a means to give ash's character a chance to be highlighted as we dont know alot about her. That, and we have two more shows before dfi so whose to say we dont see a confrontation :p