Yeah but I'm paying you to write my name down ;DQuote:
Originally Posted by B-MCINTYRE
Hey! Don't judge! It's fucking hard to feed my characters ego ;_;
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Yeah but I'm paying you to write my name down ;DQuote:
Originally Posted by B-MCINTYRE
Hey! Don't judge! It's fucking hard to feed my characters ego ;_;
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Originally Posted by VanHooliganX
Israel does not do sexual of any kind but Nutz and Boltz would be into that
Speaking of which your last installments never went through. You should check on that.Quote:
Originally Posted by VanHooliganX
Personally I think only Tommy, Ma$$ and Juarez (egotistical but still) beat you to the Promo of the Week award.Quote:
Originally Posted by VanHooliganX
Speaking of which, Promo of the Week goes to Tommy!
I'm nowhere near the best in that show bro. I'd put myself probably 4th or 5th.Quote:
Originally Posted by No_1eddiefan
All I was pointing out was I never get picked but the person I'm doing the promo with gets a few so I'm at least bringing the best out of people whilst being pretty consistent in making VHX a dickhead. :)
Lost again huh? Saw it coming a mile away.
One day I'll get some momentum going and keep it . ;)
LOL of course I'm merely fooling around so that's all this shouldn't be taken as . :p
Review form coming next.
Favorite Moment: The Thunder heel turn. Even though I knew it was coming from the beginning. It had to,honestly.
Best Match: The main event, as always on every show as is should be.
Best Promo: Thunder's heel turn.
Best Piece of Booking: Liked the Smyth apprentice thing.
Best Debut *when applicable*: Aidan Black, just to get away from the norm...Plus it was great to see Destruction's guy get jumped:p
Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: Shaz "throwing the mic down on Doom's head." there's no reason anyone ,especially someone who's supposed to be a monster,should be down long enough for the mic to get dropped in there face,from just a couple basic punches and being thrown over the ropes. Call it egotistical if you want but I would say the same if anyone else were in the situation. Also, Doom being on the ramp during Shaz's match when in my promo I made it very clear he was just showing up, lol. Another thing too: Mass hitting/knocking out everyone felt entirely unnecessary and it does nothing to me as far as heel heat goes. Looking again, Main event was kinda short to on the written end,IDK if it thes videos that are longer that does this or not ,but still. Also the Eddie promo on "Artemis Eclipse" merely because I'm getting very tired of shoots everywhere you turn lately, seeing as how three different feds have done different ones all relating to the same thing in the last month. Plus I'm a firm believer of breaking kayfabe has no place EVER in wrestling, Efed or real .
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved:Nothing to do with it being my match, but fifteen minute video or not,the written part made it seem awfully short, just like Doom and Shaz at the PPV, Bear's even said many times several JBW matches seem very short, and now I see what he means, fully.Looking again, Main event was kinda short to on the written end,IDK if it the videos that are longer that does this or not ,but stillAny Other Positives: Mystery man finally debuting was good, but it should have been obvious from the start...Who else would blatantly rip off Jericho like that? LOL.:p
Anything else that fell below your expectation: I really expected and wanted alot more of the Doom and Eddie match, it was something that seemed a letdown for me as I was psyched when I found out Doom got a match like that so soon.
How would you improve the negative comments (if any): Longer written portions ,and more attention to the detail and what not.
Overall Show Grade:IDK right now honestly, Even though there was several good and interesting things, there was also many things that weren't done right to me and just unneeded. I'll have to think hard about this one until later.
I know there's several things I felt could have been better ,and I apologize if I seem overly critical or harsh but I'm certainly not trying to be, just being honest.
Thanks for the feedback man. I felt I had to come back with a response on the shoot bit. When I read R(ob)'s shoot, I felt that there was unnecessary shooting on me as, as far as I was aware- there was no problem between us. Obviously I felt a response was necessary. J responded on IWA to make certain there wasn't too many shoots on the same show with Thunder's half shoot at the end.Quote:
Originally Posted by SouthernBlood
As for the written bit, I do agree to a certain extent, but in my eyes, weekly shows shouldn't be anything too special and the PPV matches should be great. With Resurrection, there was only complaints of one match being short- and I have already said to the person in creative who wrote that match that it should have been longer.
Also, the Ma$$ promo was a one off and Kash knows this. With whom he was knocking out, if they weren't jobbers or visitors (LL, DrunkJose, Alex Kidd) then there's always a reason.
Again, thanks for the feedback though, it will help out for sure.
Hawk: Looks like Punk landed another guest spot on show. I guess I need to get better booking agents to prevent repeat guest from ruining my ratings.
Vulgar loses to KJ Punk in an Elimination Match for the no.1 contenders match to the TV Title? Sounds familiar... :). But now I get a new feud as well, and one with AB. :cool:
I feel like a complete dumbass that I didn't realize the person impersonating Chris Jericho, is Y2J in the WWE Fed :(.
I personally feel the best promo was Juarez, with Tommy a narrow, narrow second.
It's a gift :D.Quote:
Originally Posted by VanHooliganX
My penis has been pleased working with you though :p.