SBW: Systematic Breakdown Wrestling (Feedback Thread)

[Poot-Hair]

I haven't gotten to read the first show yet, but dern it I'm going to as soon as I get off work. I've been stoked about this since the Artie/Kenta preview!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Rated_R(ob)KO]

I haven't gotten to read the first show yet, but dern it I'm going to as soon as I get off work. I've been stoked about this since the Artie/Kenta preview!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yeah, the ending is pretty good I think. I'm proud of how the show came out. August 8th is episode 2.

[Rated_R(ob)KO]

Almost 200 people have looked at the first SBW show... not a single comment. I guess no one liked it?

[Poot-Hair]

Here is my official review for SBW's first show!!

WOO ELECTRIC FACTORY!!

I freaking love Killswitch

I'm thinking Dutch Ross is alot like That1CreepyGuy with the baby's and darlings

The legend Bruno Sammartino as GM...wow. I wonder if Larry Zbysko will make a special guest appearance. One more last feud for the road.

Killswitch AND The Roots?!? I'm loving this concept more and more.

Carson Daly???? Really? Really? That douche has as much personality as a stump in the ground. Oh well, I'll give it a bit and see if I like him or not.

KEVIN STEEN!!!! *Marks the fuck out, flops on the floor, gets back up, marks out again, creams his pants and resumes*

Lol I'm actually reading the commentary in Steen and Daly's voices in my head. Truly an el-oh-el moment

Samuel Kashmen. I get the reference, I'm not sure too many others will but I definitely do. Bruva!! LMFAO

I have no idea why I just read Kyle Diamond's promo in the style of Chris Jericho but I did and it worked lol.

Wow Kashmen was freaking brutal. Busted Jager bottle (what a waste) and a total squash. I did not see that coming. Well written though.

Haha Artie is a little horndog. Do I sense a Kevin Steen/Eclipse feud?

Bahaha "ALWAYS WEAR A FUCKING CUP!!" Poor Mustachio the Mime

I'm think Kenta Hiromasu is like Kenta Kobashi, maybe it's just the first name but either way I'm loving the character diversity here.

Wow. What a main event. I actually found myself rooting for Kenta after Artie got the first pin. Who is the masked men? Will there be a rematch? Will Poot-Hair shave his balls? ALL THIS AND MORE ON THE NEXT EPISODE OF SBW!!

Great first show R(ob). Absolutely loved it and I'm stoked to continue reading this series. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!

[No_1eddiefan]

Good show man- but was disappointed to see so little characters.

Samuel Kashman- I get it!

The main event was quality, and I loved the personality clash with Steen & Daly- plus Sammartino is a good choice for GM.

A great finish too- gets everybody wondering who the masked guy was.

Looking forward to the next show as well.

[Rated_R(ob)KO]

Good show man- but was disappointed to see so little characters.

Samuel Kashman- I get it!

The main event was quality, and I loved the personality clash with Steen & Daly- plus Sammartino is a good choice for GM.

A great finish too- gets everybody wondering who the masked guy was.

Looking forward to the next show as well.

Look at SBW as how the new NXT is. A few matches and some segments. I don't have time to do 20,000 word shows anymore. No big sprawling epics. I look at it as "What can realistically fill a two hour show and not take you two hours to read" lol. But thanks for the reviews not only from you but from Poot as well.

[Rated_R(ob)KO]

Each week I'll be rolling out some new characters to keep momentum up. Then I start to roll out the new Championships... I have a plan lol.

[Poot-Hair]

Lol my review was more like my instant thoughts as I was reading the show. It shows that I actually read the whole show though and I deserve a cookie for doing so.

GIMME MY COOKIE DAMNIT!! >_<

[Rated_R(ob)KO]

The second SBW show will be here possibly Thursday at latest. I've been EXTREMELY busy with my work schedule and haven't done all of the show yet. I apologize in advance if it's not up on Wednesday but, I'm going to try my damndest. Thanks.

[Rated_R(ob)KO]

Did something retarded. I usually work on my show and every other e-fedding show I'm involved with at work and put the finishing touches on at home. Well, what usually happens is... I e-mail myself everything so that way I have it for when I'm ready to post. Well, I actually didn't e-mail myself the ENTIRE last half of the show. I'm not going to sit here and rewrite it either. I don't have the time to. So with that being said... the first half of the show will be posted today at some point and I'll continue it tomorrow when I go back to work.

Sorry about this but, it seems like only two people are reading anyway so... I still apologize.