IWA: Insane Wrestling Association

[Shaz11]

*Shaz is in the club, celebrating his birthday like crazy. He has two girls on each side, a mic, a glass of Vodka, and a spliff*

Shaz: Yeah, yeah, yeah, my name's Shazzy!
It's my birthday!
I'm partying cause it's my birthday!
Sipping Vodka cause it's my birthday!
You know that I, don't give a fuck!
Cause it's my birthday!

*Shaz takes a sip of vodka, before taking a puff of his sip, as the video package finishes*

[bearkg88]

Ok guys. IM taking 20 mins to reread any other thread that I'm apart of, then Im going to start on the show.

[TTC]

Bear sorry for the delay on my part, but if you want I can still do the promo within 20-30 minutes if you want.

[Asherdelampyr]

Yo Bear!

[bearkg88]

Bear sorry for the delay on my part, but if you want I can still do the promo within 20-30 minutes if you want.

Yeah. Go ahead. Ill leave space for it in the show

[bearkg88]

Yo Bear!

Sure did bro. Didn't get a chance to read it yet, but I will soon

[bearkg88]

FINALLY! The promo has come to... ME! Time to get on with it




If I could here some other people's opinions on this, it'd be great. i'd love to know if it was just me




1) I'm not entirely sure, perhaps a bit more comentary would help, talking about the aftermath of the match and what's still up and coming. Also, instead of just writing "the camera changes to" you could have the commentators actually talk about it. I'm not a 100% sure, I just felt the show felt a little disjointed.

2) Okay, I get your points, but for a match like Hart vs. Kyojin, with really not too much build, how can you say that a Super Package Piledriver warranted a kickout? In my eyes nobody should ever be kicking out of that, with the rare exception of a several month long feud main event final battle between the two. This wasn't that.

Also, after Shaz had hit the flip piledriver off the ladder, they both got up at the same time and began trading blows if I remember correctly. Surely Hawk should have been all but dead, much worse off than Shaz who, although hurt, should be a lot better off. Could just be me though. I'm not sure if I'm the only one who does this, but I like to visualise the matches, and these two incidents didn't add up in my mind.


As for the Steel Cage match and Tables match, I felt you got it just right with those too. They had an epic feel, they fitted their place on the card, yet they still felt realistic.

In the case of the Hart/Kyojin match my reasoning behind the kick out was that it was a last minute spur of change that was meant to throw Kyojin off. With him kicking out, it shows that no matter what's thrown at him, he is going to do everything he can to keep that title, to the point that he would nearly die to keep it.

As for the ladder match,, I get your point

[bearkg88]

Show is about halfway done guys. I got one more match to write, then edit the rest and it'll be done

[wrestlingfan66513]

*Shaz is in the club, celebrating his birthday like crazy. He has two girls on each side, a mic, a glass of Vodka, and a spliff*

Shaz: Yeah, yeah, yeah, my name's Shazzy!
It's my birthday!
I'm partying cause it's my birthday!
Sipping Vodka cause it's my birthday!
You know that I, don't give a fuck!
Cause it's my birthday!

*Shaz takes a sip of vodka, before taking a puff of his sip, as the video package finishes*

Hawk: Look at that, a little bit after he lost his briefcase, he's become a hopeless drunk drinking away his problems. Well I have a big surprise for Shaz and everyone tonight.

[bearkg88]

So there is one promo that is well...different...I didn't adjust it, or change it or anything. I'm goingg to let you guys read it as it was wrote. I'm sure you'll be able to pick out which one it is