IWA: Insane Wrestling Association

[THE HEARTBREAK KID]

Also, commentary to me is huge! it can be the difference between a good promo and a great promo for me personally, if the commentary is not to my taste, I find it hard reading the shows no matter what.

I'm also not a massive fan of commentators swearing all the time or joking around too much which happened in EWA a little too much for me in some cases, I like to think in the WWE Fed we have the right balance and I think you guys have it here too.

[THE HEARTBREAK KID]

Best Match: Shaz vs Dixon. Should've been the show ender, tho.
Best Promo: Love reading CAR. Always entertaining.
Best Piece of Booking: The dissension in the Infection. Could an AJ Dixon face turn be coming???
Best Debut(When Applicable): Juno Mercury (Love the two Greek God names btw)
Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: No Smyth/Kyo promo and no Rob Rage whatsoever.
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: meh. not really.
Overall Show Grade: B+

Thanks man means a lot.

[bearkg88]

Thanks for the feedback guys. For the next show im going to try tweaking things a little to see what the over all consensus is. If you read this, and havent done your promo which i believe most havent, please bold and color when your wrestler talks itll save me time

One thought that went through my head was this. What if everything was bolded, and actions, like entrances, matches, ect, were also italicized?

[THE HEARTBREAK KID]

Also thanks to those that liked my promo with CAR. glad you enjoyed it.

As for Jelly and his style, personally I think it's clever, sometimes in Effeding you just don't fancy reading through every promo and segment and there's been times when I have done that personally, but you can always tell a promo from Jelly because of how he sets it out, so because I know it's him instantly.. and I like what he does, I read them.

To me.. as long as the promo is good, then it don't matter about the style.

[Shaz11]

Best Match: Dixon/Shaz
Best Promo: Gonna go with Dixon/VHX.
Best Piece of Booking: Jman being announced as HolyJose's replacement.
Best Debut(When Applicable): Juno Mercury.
Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like:
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved:
Any Other Positives: I think the Note/Domino, and Slayde/Elric promos were decent. I'm happy the Shaz/Jman promo got some positivity as well- pleasure to work with him, cheers guys.
Any Other Constructive Criticism: N/A
Overall Show Grade: A-

[KJ PUNK]

So I checked out chaos! Here's some things I enjoyed.

I liked the segment from Van and Rehm, I felt both guys did well with the promo.

Since coming here I have enjoyed the Adonis/Shining feud and I liked the promo from Adonis this week, the added extra of the tombstone with Valentina's name on was pretty cool too.

My promo (Bear you left the *Insert town* thing in there, I was hoping you would fill that in lol.)

Tag match was good and the ending was cool, look forward to the next ppv to see the outcome!

KJ Punk promo was simple but effective, Also the ending to that got me excited to see who's behind it.

I liked the divas promo, I also think many of them will get better as they go along as there characters are pretty new.

Good job with the Shaz/Dixon match, liked it and it kept the feuds ticking nicely.

Loved the ending segment between JMan, Shaz & Smokey was really well done all round.

Good show!

That should be my nickname. "Simple but effective"

[K2Jelly]

KAYFABULOUS

Blog #86: Missing the GravyTrain

Writer & Editor: Ron Macoonie

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What's happenin' marks?! This is R-Mac here with yet another Kayfabulous blog for you since you wouldn't stop bugging us about it since it's apparent you don't have any lives. Pathetic meatsacks. I kid, I kid. Anyways, some of you may be wondering why we're not interviewing Brock Lesnar, I mean Edwards like we promised. Well, number one, Drek got a restraining order against the guy so we're kinda out of luck. Tough s*$#, Edwards. Second, we never said that we'd be doing vlogs back to back anyways so for the guys who've been pestering us about it F*&% OFF, M'KAY?!!!? Sheesh, why am I being this snarky and crass? That's Drek's job. I'm supposed to be the cuddly teddy bear.

So going right in, I just want to address a petition that's been circulating since yesterday after Chaos. It was to get Smokey fired when it was announced that Kayfabulous wouldn't be in the tag team match at Destined For Immortality. Guys, guys, chiiiiiiiill. I'm sure creative has something for us afterwards so no need for all of that hostility. Remember, we embrace the real from the illusion so let's not go barging down doors and demanding things from people like hooligans. Besides, if we really needed help with this, you could just call up Liam Neeson have him go Taken on all those punk bitches. That'd be pretty cool. But besides that, lots of things are changing up in the IWA, namely a new show and new people coming up in the ranks, namely Juno Mercury. But what does that mean for us? Well, it either means:

1. We done missed the gravy train.

For those of you who've noticed, we used to be the only face tag team in the IWA until all these other ones swarmed onto the scene, including Venemous and Carbon. It's not gonna be smooth sailing anymore since now, there are two disposable units against the overcrowding heel tag teams which means we'll have to work twice as hard to get over. But don't sweat it cause *does best George Lopez impression* WE GOT THIIIIIIIS!

2. We'll be utilized as a main commodity

With two brands, obviously, the roster's gonna be divided. If that's the case, there's a chance that we could easily be on top of the tag division on whatever brand we're on. Of course, we'll have to work hard and get over but we can handle that no sweat with less competition to worry about. So, in the end, quit worrying, okay? It's not gonna do you guys any good. If you really want to vent our your frustrations, buy yourself one of those stress balls or something. Or better yet, heat this true story about our "esteemed" world champion:

Okay, so anyways, you know that laptop that was given to Shaz by us at Full Throttle? Thing is, it crashed because of all the RedTube surfing he was doing. Yeah, imagine that. A ladies man doing RedTube. Moving on, since I kinda...pilfered some of Drek's cash to buy it for him in the first place, he had me repair it on my own since he knew I'd "borrow" his money to hire a techie to fix it. Turns out that while his RedTube story was authentic, we found some pretty interesting pictures and videos in the history that led up to the problem in the first place. After seeing such images, I'm afraid of the term "circle jerk". I'm also weened off of hot dogs for life.

As I try and shake off the horrors that transpired, I'm gonna cut things off for today. Tune in next time when Drek and I discuss what we'll be doing at D.F.I so make sure you stay tuned on for more updates on our activities. Also, it's about time that I introduce Juno Mercury to a chemistry element of my own: lead. PEACE!!!


Until next time,

Ron <3

[THE HEARTBREAK KID]

That should be my nickname. "Simple but effective"

Nothing wrong with that bro, I liked it Well done man.

[KJ PUNK]

Nothing wrong with that bro, I liked it Well done man.

I don't want to be one of those guys who rabbles on about nothing and repeats himself. I hit my points and finish. Some people think that quality = quantity but that's not the truth. Quality = quality and if I can do a good promo in two paragraphs I will because I know most people aren't going to bother reading a massive wall of text where you repeat the same point 15 times in it.

[THE HEARTBREAK KID]

I don't want to be one of those guys who rabbles on about nothing and repeats himself. I hit my points and finish. Some people think that quality = quantity but that's not the truth. Quality = quality and if I can do a good promo in two paragraphs I will because I know most people aren't going to bother reading a massive wall of text where you repeat the same point 15 times in it.

Yeah I agree man! in my experience, the best promo's are the ones that flow, if that ends up being 2 paragraphs or 6 then fine. As you said and I agree, just talking to make the promo longer is not going to improve it's quality.