IWA: Insane Wrestling Association

[Vandarius]

Who wrote the Pamich/Drayman match? Match of the night, so far!

That would be me! ...

WOW! The Mercury/Vivica match was amazing! My new pick of the night so far. Fantastically written.

Goddamn it. I lost my accolade! Curse you whoever wrote that match!

[S.E. Zero]

That would be me! ...



Goddamn it. I lost my accolade! Curse you whoever wrote that match!

Oh sure, comment on his review....hurtful!!! T___T

[S.E. Zero]

Slayde promo was short and to the point. Managed to get a feel for the build up, which shows that promos don't have to be long. Saying that, I would have liked a little bit more from him, but still fantastic.

I wrote the Elric/Slayde match, so can't review it and as I am a slow reader, I can skip it as I know how it ends!

I have a stand where if I'm just asked for a backstage promo (that's not an interview), I like to keep 'em short since they're just meant to be a transition between matches. Long promos I tend to save for in ring purposes where he has more time to really put it all out there before a crowd.

I wanted to get your thoughts on that match even though you wrote it.

[Vandarius]

Oh sure, comment on his review....hurtful!!! T___T

I just got here! xD I finished the show and read from newest to oldest, havent gone through yours yet ;P

[S.E. Zero]

I just got here! xD I finished the show and read from newest to oldest, havent gone through yours yet ;P

Lol, it's fine, bro. I was just messing around

[bearkg88]

S.e.z and benny thank you for the reviews. Yes, i wrote the rob rage interview. I looked at old promos of his and tried to tailor it like those.

[BennyTheBall]

I have a stand where if I'm just asked for a backstage promo (that's not an interview), I like to keep 'em short since they're just meant to be a transition between matches. Long promos I tend to save for in ring purposes where he has more time to really put it all out there before a crowd.

I wanted to get your thoughts on that match even though you wrote it.

I didn't mean a long promo - just a little longer. Still a great read though.

I can't really review my own match writing as I am my own biggest critic. I wanted to start the match off really slowly and keep building it towards the end. The final fall was rather short in comparison to the other two, but in my mind it had to be as that is where both men would be exceptionally tired. Saying that, though, I felt it was also the strongest part of the match. I had to change things slightly in aid to write out Krysys (for a while, at least) and your finisher pretty much solved that problem for me! lol

I dunno. It's my work, so I'll never be happy with it 100% and because it's mine, I'll never give it an objective review. But I am glad you enjoyed it, and I hope that resonates around the rest of the guys and dolls reading it too.

[Vandarius]

Edwards vs. Wells was a great choice to start the PPV. That match was good, though seeing Edwards going to rope made believe he was (much like Lesnar did) going for a Shooting Star Press rather than a Spear, that was a bit of a disappointment in my mind. The submission finish finish in my mind saved it, since after a few pin attempts and countout moments, I was beginning to think this match would drag on a bit. Plus it made for Edwards to break Wells' arm, taking him out of IWA for the time being. Great heel move spitting on Wells at the end. Edwards looked great and could be next in line for a championship run or enter another big feud soon.

Cage getting the win was fantastic. Match had an intense feel to it. Steele having been busted open helped in that regard. Cage now sets himself for big things with this win. Steele looked great as well, he just needs a big break to really stand out more.

I myself saw Pamich winning but with the way the match ended, I have a feeling this feud may not be over just yet, so Pamich may yet that win but it was a great turn of event having Draymen win. Good job on that.

Darius' promo was good. I like how he addressed many thing including the 24 videos. Though this may prove to serve that his mind is not 100% in this matchup and he could lose, so we'll see how focused he is later.

Edwards/Wells: All I have to say is I did my job ;D You were expecting something but got something else. While the spear isn't nearly as awesome as the Shooting Star Press, I just didn't want to have something predictable. I'm glad you enjoyed the submission finish, I felt that it was needed, and it helped Edwards grow in my eyes heel wise.

Cage/Steele: I'll admit, it took me a while to write this match. I've never really done a David/Goliath sort of match, but it seems that it paid off I'm glad the blood spill did justice, I felt it would help Cage and make the match that more intense.

Pamich/Draymen: Never underestimate the underdog. I don't want to sound biased (since Draymen is my character), but he is a force to be reckoned with my friend Pamich is awesome though, and I bet he will easily brush this loss off of his shoulder and move on.

Darius: I did my job The point of my promo was to make it seem like Darius had officially snapped, and that his head wasn't in the game.

[S.E. Zero]

I didn't mean a long promo - just a little longer. Still a great read though.

I can't really review my own match writing as I am my own biggest critic. I wanted to start the match off really slowly and keep building it towards the end. The final fall was rather short in comparison to the other two, but in my mind it had to be as that is where both men would be exceptionally tired. Saying that, though, I felt it was also the strongest part of the match. I had to change things slightly in aid to write out Krysys (for a while, at least) and your finisher pretty much solved that problem for me! lol

I dunno. It's my work, so I'll never be happy with it 100% and because it's mine, I'll never give it an objective review. But I am glad you enjoyed it, and I hope that resonates around the rest of the guys and dolls reading it too.

My finisher is meant to be devastating since it actually strikes the neck, lol. Glad it could help

It was put in your hands so I knew it'd be a great match

[AshleyPunk]

Gonna read the show

Had to cancel my saturday night plans and so i thought i will read DFI