JBW: Justifiably Badass Wrestling

[S.E. Zero]

Alright,this is very minor really,certainly nothing to do with Characters,gimmicks,kayfabe or nothin like that...Just a little thing to avoid in the future I guess;When it said "Cage grabbed Doom by his hair."...That's the thing,Doom doesn't HAVE hair...Very short,more like Orton when its close cut,that Skinhead style basically...As I said just a small oversight...Though it appears creative aren't keep tabs on my character's appearance from the profile,LOL.

Aside from what was related to your character, any other feedback? That's what we're looking for.

[SouthernBlood]

Aside from what was related to your character, any other feedback? That's what we're looking for.

Yea shit seemed swell as far as the other stuff,Not too many typos I noticed or nothin. And you should be lookin for ALL feedback,lol.

[S.E. Zero]

Yea shit seemed swell as far as the other stuff,Not too many typos I noticed or nothin. And you should be lookin for ALL feedback,lol.

We do but when you really only comment on shit, as you elegantly put it, relating to your character without mentioning the rest of the show, we've got no clue as to what you felt could've been better, what match you enjoyed, what promo you liked, etc. It's a matter of stepping out of the "all about me" bubble some users tend to get into when reading only read the parts they are involved in and dont care to share their thoughts on what others have done.

That's why I asked for your thoughts on matters outside of your character.

[S.E. Zero]

A good guideline to follow for future feedback is to fill out this

Best Match:
Best Promo:
Best Piece of Booking:
Best Debut *when applicable*:
Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like:
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved:
Any Other Positives:
Any Other Constructive Criticism:
Overall Show Grade:

It will really help us improve and give you guys better shows heading into 2013.

[SouthernBlood]

We do but when you really only comment on shit, as you elegantly put it, relating to your character without mentioning the rest of the show, we've got no clue as to what you felt could've been better, what match you enjoyed, what promo you liked, etc. It's a matter of stepping out of the "all about me" bubble some users tend to get into when reading only read the parts they are involved in and dont care to share their thoughts on what others have done.

That's why I asked for your thoughts on matters outside of your character.

Yea I understood that you would think the "All about Me" ,but no,I read the whole show..I aint one of those self centered types.

[SouthernBlood]

Best Match:I've got to say Main event,It fit the bill as the last match,welly written.
Best Promo:Have to come back to this.
Best Piece of Booking:Van HX and Darius...Good time to see the two IC contenders go at to get an idea of what's coming at Resurrection.
Best Debut *when applicable*:
Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like:This has nothing to do with it being about me,Say it is and I'll ignore it,plain and simple...I think Doom should have had more offense against Shaz and or cage...Just cuz it seems to me the feud could use a little more heat on it heading towards the PPV...One attack...that wasn't written out mind you...and not a whole lot of reasons to make you get behind Shaz and Hate Doom,other than promos...I know the little bit of fighting helped...but not as much as it could have...Plus....Where was Jose? I understand if he was simply busy with holidays...But it's just not a good idea to not have a number one contender for the World title not featured at all.
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved:Broc Edwards against Athena...
Any Other Positives:The Champion V Champion was swell as well.
Any Other Constructive Criticism:Maybe later.
Overall Show Grade:B +,not terrible,but the few little things brought it down.

It will really help us improve and give you guys better shows heading into 2013.[/QUOTE]

[BennyTheBall]

Best Match: Main event.
Best Promo: I can't decide if it's Arthur Lansdale or Mike Hawk.
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: I thought that the Main Event promo could have had more to it.
Any Other Positives: Great show, well structured, good to see things developing.
Any Other Constructive Criticism: The grey colour - it's a bit difficult to read and I found myself skipping most of those parts.
Overall Show Grade: C

[Destruction]

Alright,this is very minor really,certainly nothing to do with Characters,gimmicks,kayfabe or nothin like that...Just a little thing to avoid in the future I guess;When it said "Cage grabbed Doom by his hair."...That's the thing,Doom doesn't HAVE hair...Very short,more like Orton when its close cut,that Skinhead style basically...As I said just a small oversight...Though it appears creative aren't keep tabs on my character's appearance from the profile,LOL.

From a creative point, I must say that's it's very time consuming looking out for minor details like this, and it delays the show, should the need for looking at everyone's bio before writing the show be required.

Best Match: The Main Event
Best Promo: Lansdale wins this
Best Piece of Booking: No one thing, but I'm glad there was a lot of clean wins
Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: I felt Blade needed the win instead of TDA. Even being dirty, it would've gave him more momentum
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: I would've liked a little more from Edwards, but that's about it.
Any Other Positives: Well written commentary, Juarez did awesome, as did Rage/Smyth and Hawk
Any Other Constructive Criticism: Hawk losing clean. A dirty result would be best for both champions I think.
Overall Show Grade: A good show, B-

[No_1eddiefan]

Best Match:I've got to say Main event,It fit the bill as the last match,welly written.
Best Promo:Have to come back to this.
Best Piece of Booking:Van HX and Darius...Good time to see the two IC contenders go at to get an idea of what's coming at Resurrection.
Best Debut *when applicable*:
Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like:This has nothing to do with it being about me,Say it is and I'll ignore it,plain and simple...I think Doom should have had more offense against Shaz and or cage...Just cuz it seems to me the feud could use a little more heat on it heading towards the PPV...One attack...that wasn't written out mind you...and not a whole lot of reasons to make you get behind Shaz and Hate Doom,other than promos...I know the little bit of fighting helped...but not as much as it could have...Plus....Where was Jose? I understand if he was simply busy with holidays...But it's just not a good idea to not have a number one contender for the World title not featured at all.
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved:Broc Edwards against Athena...
Any Other Positives:The Champion V Champion was swell as well.
Any Other Constructive Criticism:Maybe later.
Overall Show Grade:B +,not terrible,but the few little things brought it down.

It will really help us improve and give you guys better shows heading into 2013.

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He was at the end of the show....

[BennyTheBall]

He was at the end of the show....

That awkward moment where someone points out that you didn't read the show fully. lol